|Reviews for Reading: Sun's Heir, Death's Guardian|
| DannyPhantom619 chapter 5 . 7/21
Yeah...Apluto is a dick.
Cool guy ...but still a Dick.
| Monster King chapter 29 . 7/15
Great story within a great story or two I really liked how you wrote this as a narrative of another story that I enjoyed it also liked the humor in it all in all good story.
| genesicgaogaigarvsgodgundam chapter 3 . 6/17
| za worlda chapter 27 . 5/29
| za worlda chapter 24 . 5/29
frank is the best in this if not naruto obviously
| Iskander Mandoraekon chapter 25 . 4/19
Just so you know, Sai technically did attack Artemis directly with the first Ink Beast (the one she killed) while the second went for Thalia.
| Bulba Fett chapter 11 . 3/19
Now I just feel bad for Frank :'(
| jbadillodavila chapter 1 . 3/10
Muy bueno ggc
| Mcclaine chapter 26 . 12/21/2015
Good story, but seriously lay off the feminine fury a little bit. it was funny the first couple of chapters, but it feels overused and unneeded. case and point having Naruto feel he deserves a punch for having previous partners before Thalia and he were even dating is bullshit. Being consistent with you're character is a must, so having a competent witty Naruto who acts like a more restrained version of his father is the direction you want to keep to, instead of having Naruto wilt under their glares, not standing behind his actions or defend himself. it sends mixed messages to me and overall degrades your characterization.
Again, I'd like to reiterate, that yours and boneboys story which to my understanding you have collaborated on these stories like you did when you portrayed Naruto as a son of Aphrodite, is light years ahead of most as entertaining and interesting to read, but one of things that I've noticed is the over use of the word "sigh" It's kind of a pet peeve of mine as well, because sighing generally portrays weariness and aging, and in certain cases is ok to use. Most of the time you might find Dumbledore or the Sandaime sigh a lot mostly because of age but also because of the actions they have taken during their long careers. Other times, you might find characters sigh in exasperation, but that's about it. The word is overused, weakens your character and I find its a lazy way to describe what a character is doing, and can usually be omitted from most of this story.
| MatthewBadger chapter 2 . 12/19/2015
frank my man... i feel for you...
| MatthewBadger chapter 1 . 12/18/2015
| yukicrewger2 chapter 24 . 11/29/2015
Taiyoton / Solar Release / Sun Style
| Panther-Strife chapter 7 . 10/24/2015
Why do you hate frank also you sucked.
| Shadowolf chapter 16 . 10/19/2015
OMFG I-I CANT OH GOD IT HURTS HAHAHAHAHAHA.
| Axcel chapter 17 . 10/11/2015
Frank has become a true son of Mars.