The work is very interesting. The length of the chapters is equal to a spoonful of delicious cake, exactly as much as needed and not a gram more. In the last chapters I was worried that the villains would do something dirty. Personally, for me, there is a lack of a trial arc and a death arc... and a cruel and bloody one at that. I have read many other fanfics where a similar plot about parents and magical Britain is involved, your version shows that people have such darkness in their hearts that it makes their blood boil in their veins in the hope of reprisal. Once again, thank you very much.

Man, you weren't kidding about hating the Potter in this...
Well done, mate.

Awesome story

...enough with the sobbing... i get and understand the emotional pain she's going through, but the flat out sobbing is extremely annoying

Sweet fic, a little rushed, but nice reading.

Honestly, a very well written book. Interesting interpretation of the characters but overall a happy ending so can’t complain. I’m actually sad to see it end, well done!

interesting ending, I'm curious about an epilogue, but overall, my curiosity and imagination are satisfied. Good fic.

Do you still need the cover art? And editing is a bit complicated, I know. You have to edit either the original document in docs or make a new one, and then where you go to post new chapters instead click on replace chapter. Then you can update a chapter. It's annoying, so I really don't do it unless I really messed up. As for the cover art, I have a bit of a side hobby of graphic design, but it's all very simplistic. Look at my profile, one of my books has a cover, that's the type of stuff I can do. DM me if u still want the cover.

the editing of Helena Ravenclaw's story and the progression of the story gets better and better. And the plot grows thicker. *double thumbs up*

big bang, a lot of plot reveals, hope you go over what happened in both their pasts because it is most certainly not canon, but sounds interesting, so I'm moving on to the next chapter.

Clear case of underestimating the Asgardian strength with that meeting.

Yeah you should have realized that they would keep Ana on Asgard as much as possible unless they knew she was at an advanced enough level to be able to defend herself in a battle.

A whole new level of evil and darkness.

And now the Asgardians are showing how serious they are about the broken treaty.

Wow , this was the chapter that we started seeing a whole new level of dark Dumbledore.