|Reviews for Claiborne|
| Iron Stag chapter 5 . 4/7/2014
WHOAH WHOAH WHOAH Elenwen is into Claiborne?
Some weird romance right there heheh
| Iron Stag chapter 4 . 1/18/2014
Wow, Allalian got busted up pretty quickly. Guess his prowess hasn't developed just yet. No matter, he'll be back...
Oh, and good job on the chap.
| Iron Stag chapter 3 . 1/11/2014
I'm excited to see how you present the Dominion.
| elflinglegolas chapter 2 . 1/6/2014
I really like your idea of the Ranger Corps. It is very original and I haven't really seen anything like it here. I should know, I stalk the Skyrim fics heh. The only thing I would have to say is maybe your chapters could be a bit longer and slightly more descriptive. I can see many openings where something else could have been added to immerse the reader just a tad more. I'm a sucker for poetic diction. I always try to remember to show my reader, don't tell. Really though, I can't wait to read more. Please keep updating!
| Iron Stag chapter 2 . 1/4/2014
Holy crappers, King Allalian! Alright, got some Dominion action going on here.
| Justin chapter 1 . 1/2/2014
I enjoyed it. Well written and lore-friendly. Keep it up.
| Iron Stag chapter 1 . 1/2/2014
Well, I'll be honest, I wasn't expecting too much when I arrived, but I was quite surprised at how enjoyable it was. I actually read the whole thing (which I don't do often).
I'll be sure to send u a character bio soon, once I make it.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/1/2014