Reviews for Sensation
Wolfspirit44 chapter 1 . 12/27/2014
I was crying hysterically when reading this, and then cracking up as I read the last few sentences. You really are something, an amazing brilliant and talented writer! This story is proof of your awesome skills!
amazing story, and I really wish this was how the manga played out. You fulfilled my fantasies! Great job!
dragonball256 chapter 1 . 10/22/2014
Aw so great. Love this pairing.
gennyreads chapter 1 . 7/4/2014
Cuteee c:
IchiRukiLover chapter 1 . 2/15/2014
Omfg! I'm fangirling so much over this fanfic! Haha this was so good! And Wendy was hilarious
summerthyme record chapter 1 . 2/6/2014
Hey! :) I'm trying to get into the habit of giving out concrit and being at least remotely helpful, so here goes!

Grammar (I'm just going down to one sentence which has the major points I want to cover. sorry. :/ but I just don't have the time .):
Dialogue grammar. Yup. I'm not sure what's going around here, but you're bouncing around- sometimes right, sometimes not.

ex: "Let's start over again," The blue haired...
- Several points about this. "The" should be lowercased. It's an uh, extension of a sentence, if you will; thus capitalizing is a nono.
- "blue haired" should be hyphenated. It's because without the hyphen, the word "blue" can be used to modify the later noun, not hair.

This is great. Seriously. The feels and everything and the way you characterized everyone. Gahhh, I'm jelly. :') And this: "His touch is unwelcome. It hurts more than it should." *dies from excessive feels* Wahh, if only this happened in the manga... /tearflick
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RubyDemonXoXo chapter 1 . 1/10/2014
HOLY JESUS! This made me cry! Yet another of your stories moved me to tears! I have nothis else to say about this story but PERFECTION!
manycolouredeyes chapter 1 . 1/6/2014
Oh goodness me I am squealing with joy and the fluff oh gosh I LOVE THIS STORY AND HOW CUTE THIS TWO ARE I AM SO UNABLE TO CAN!
lucyglitter11 chapter 1 . 1/5/2014
Hahaha the last two lines! XD XD
So well written! Nice one!
imahappyperson chapter 1 . 1/3/2014
You wrote this with Jerza perfection in mind. WE should send this to Mashima. Mashima should make this an omake. This is so fitting for an omake. You should write more Jerza. I applaud for the excellent feels coming out of the two. I am just so happy that you wrote this, posted this on the fanfic site, and let us reader have some Jerza bliss. My Jerza angst has been wiped off dry by your story. *hugs you* :D
Ajerzaaddict chapter 1 . 1/2/2014
this is so beautifully written, it brings tears to my eyes.
ahsinam33 chapter 1 . 1/2/2014
Beautiful story. I love it! You write really well and this was just so sweet and endearing. If only something like this would happen in the manga...
Keep up the good work!
grip on gravity chapter 1 . 1/2/2014
ohmigawd this was seriously one of the best fics i've ever read! continue making more pease!
Ash Lite chapter 1 . 1/2/2014
Awesome! Great work! This is going into my 'favourite' folder. Keep it up and stay golden!
wyttyktty chapter 1 . 1/1/2014
what does Happy connect with Erza and Jellal's love? )
xNightDreamerx chapter 1 . 1/1/2014
This needs more reviews I first want to say how much heartbreak and squealing this caused me and my mom. First the heartbreak, all this fluff just killed my heart, and my mom's ears probably went half deaf by the sound of me squealing alot to the highest volume possible, So I shall thank you for making such a creative oneshot. :)
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