Reviews for The Long Way Home
Ratchet-999 chapter 2 . 11/16/2015
Wow just wow that's an amazing continue I want to know what next :)
TexasSupernaturalCowgirl chapter 2 . 10/17/2015
Nice beginning, hope you continue the story.
greenwings33 chapter 2 . 7/24/2015
Have to ask: where's the dialogue? Without it, this is just a plot outline
Delete-account-please-6878249 chapter 2 . 7/4/2015
Very good can't wait to to read more so please update soon.
Delete-account-please-6878249 chapter 1 . 7/4/2015
Sound like an excellent story off to the next chapter.
Delete-account-please-6829121 chapter 2 . 6/17/2015
Good chapter and great start in the story I hope you will update again and soon.
Delete-account-please-6829121 chapter 1 . 6/17/2015
This story sounds good so off to read the next chapter.
jdgatorbait chapter 1 . 6/3/2015
Please, please finish this story, it is one of the few that has Gibbs/McGee paired together. (They are my favorite couple.) Would love to see them work everything out. Maybe even have a little fun when it is time for the baby, i.e. nervous Gibbs and maybe Tony in the bullpen, when Tim goes into labor.
jdgatorbait chapter 2 . 8/21/2014
please, oh please complete this story
Brinohms chapter 2 . 7/3/2014
Are you writing a story or narrating an event? More dialogue and less narration please.
Guest chapter 2 . 4/9/2014
This is okay but would be much better if there was some actual dialog.
Too much overview.
Gottahavemyncis chapter 2 . 4/9/2014
I like the premise - I always love Tim and Jethro together even if Gibbs is being a idiot in this part - and I understand this has been the setup for the rest of the story. It would be really great if there was dialogue between the characters along with the narrative. I can't wait to see the rest of the story!
randomplotbunny chapter 2 . 4/8/2014
I can't wait for more of this amazing story!
SherryGabs chapter 2 . 3/29/2014
I really like these first 2 chapters. It would be nice if there was more actual conversation, instead of just an overview of everything the characters do.

But I am getting a true sense of how unsure and hurt Tim is, while Gibbs is being such a jerk. LOL.

Hope you continue with this story. I'd love to read more.
Guest chapter 2 . 3/23/2014
Please update soon very interesting
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