|Reviews for With Fires And Pillows|
| steve.moore.9081323 chapter 16 . 5/7
Looking forward to more
| starboy454 chapter 16 . 3/25
| Deliberatee chapter 16 . 3/13
Oh my god, it just went from fluffy to suspense, I hope you haven't abandoned this amazing story..;) Hope you're well (and here's to wishing there'll be an update soon). Kudos!
| Jason chapter 9 . 1/6
I feel like Hermione has become someone else here. She doesn't have much of a personality (the one we all know and love) and I am craving some substance when it comes to her.
Harry's descent into darkness was abrupt. I wish you had dragged it out more. It would have been fun to see Hermione snap at him about it (she dragged his ass out of his room when Arthur got attacked by the snake remember and got him to TALK to her).
Hermione needs her own agency too and she's a bit meek and unlike herself.
| Jason chapter 1 . 1/6
Okay First! I really like what you intended to do. Harry and Hermione lose their inhibitions and realize that hey! Their best friend is actually a sexual being and kind of hot.
Now here's the part that ticked me off a bit: I know this was written in Harry's POV but Hermione seemed like a doll during sex with Harry. She wasn't exploring him as much as he was exploring her. Yeah she may be a vrigin but virgins can read a lot of naughty stuff you know (or watch porn lol). I would think Hermione would have been hella curious to touch, kiss and bite Harry. Bump and grind ya know?
Speaking of virginities - when did Harry become so worldly? It was a bit odd and I had to remind myself that even though I saw the name 'Harry' while reading, it was actually bumbling awkward Harry Potter being so smooth.
Don't get me wrong I enjoyed it! I am all for Hermione and Harry having mind blowing sex however those two lil things kinda hindered my enjoyment.
I am looking forward to seeing what you have planned though. Hopefully Hermione would turn the tables on Harry. Hopefully Harry would show her his extensive porn collection (that's the only reason I can think of as to WHY this kid has moves - honestly with his life when did he get some action?! He was always brooding or somebody was trying to kill him!).
| Guest chapter 16 . 12/27/2015
I loved! Please, keep writing.
| lozzy035 chapter 16 . 12/26/2015
Glad they're leaving while they can
Luna really is a powerful seer
| Soulless Huntress chapter 16 . 12/26/2015
I hope Minerva is on the good side, I always thought that Dumbles did something to her to make follow him without reason. She could be so much more and stronger if it hadn't been for Dumbledork. She is a very strong witch in my opinion, he had to control her somehow.
| Guest chapter 16 . 12/25/2015
Excellent chapter. Please continue...
| Slytherin-Faerie.Princess chapter 16 . 12/24/2015
Must know more! Please update soon, Merry Christmas!
| Cateagle chapter 16 . 12/24/2015
And they're off and I daresay a lot of folk are going to be very, very unhappy at what transpires and I reckon they are going to be quite surprised by what they find (at a guess, Harry's mother was near as non-magical in ancestry as believed or Harry's victories over Tom have given him some extra titles and associated "goodies").
Luna is giving good advice and I suspect she's got unique means of avoiding the coming inquisition as Dumbledore and his minions, Tom and his minions, and Cornelius and his minions lose track of Harry as well as any control they may have thought they had.
| Cateagle chapter 15 . 12/24/2015
Okay, they are getting their forces together while they can. I daresay that there's a lot going on that they need to avoid at the moment.
| pawsrule chapter 16 . 12/23/2015
Thanks for exciting chapter can't wait to find out what the goblins say.
| Grovek26 chapter 16 . 12/23/2015
Excellent chapter. The story is really beginning to pick up pace. Using Luna as your device for increasing the urgency was a great move.
| cynder93 chapter 16 . 12/23/2015
take that dumbolddork! well lets see if this dissovels into a scene a la catch me if you can (the movie) ;D