Reviews for Too Close For Comfort
Chloe chapter 9 . 2/2
Good story and concept. But a few technical and grammar errors. Watch your spelling as it's "Grimmauld" not "Grimwald", "Weasley" not "Weasly" and also "Quidditch" not "Quidich" etc etc. Maybe trying getting a beta or have someone read over your writing. Very good so far but with a bit more focus on grammar and also structure then you'd be flying. Best of luck writing.
Pepper-up Pomfrey chapter 1 . 1/30
good one!
Lupinesence chapter 8 . 1/14
Good chapter
Guest chapter 8 . 1/11
Liked it! 3
frankilyc chapter 7 . 1/6
OMG! WHAT THE HECK HAS GOT HARRY? PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
frankilyc chapter 5 . 1/6
I'm a little scared of this chapter... but it's really good!
frankilyc chapter 4 . 1/6
Polyjuice Potion! That is SUCH a good idea! Wow, your good!
frankilyc chapter 2 . 1/6
OMG! IS HARRY DEAD!?
frankilyc chapter 1 . 1/6
This is a great chapter! Lots of drama in it! LOVE IT!
Lupinesence chapter 7 . 1/6
Cool chapter, bit of an evil cliffie ;)
xxwinterbeautyxx chapter 2 . 1/6
is draco and blaise going to make an appearance in this story
xxwinterbeautyxx chapter 1 . 1/6
update soon
Harry1675 chapter 7 . 1/6
Great work considering how fast you write and update
Guest chapter 6 . 1/5
Keep writing, keep writing m'dear!
Guest chapter 6 . 1/4
I loved it! Once again an amazing chapter please update soon!
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