Reviews for Things Happen Things End
CorycianAngel1944 chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
I like the story
Peppermint-n-Spice chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
Sora can't ALWAYS be happy. (-o-)/
But aw, that was sad. :'( When Riku said happy b-day to Sora, I felt super sad. !_! ...Though at first I was like, "What's Monstro?" /That's/ how long it's been since I've seen the 1st/2nd games or played any for that matter. (-_-)' Ah well, I liked this one-shot! It was sad but sweet! Sweet-n-Sour... Yummers. :3

•.Dr. Pepper•.
duckie lover 151 chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
Oh... At first I thought he was writing a birthday note to one of them and it was actually sort of funny. Like, that's so like Sora! But then I realized he was writing to himself and it was actually pretty sad...
The ending with Riku was perfect. This was so bittersweet; I loved it. I really go for that sort of thing. ;)
XD I wish I could fire MY muse agent! If only I could find her! She went on vacation a couple of years ago and never came back! XD
Keep writing!
Random Kingdom Hearts Fan chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
This was good! Aww, poor Sora, poor Riku. For a one-shot, this should've been included in the game. Seriously! It was cute, sweet, showed friendship, and could fit into the story well. Good job!
jcola0823 chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
Aw, this makes me kinda sad D:


Awesome job, I love the whole concept of it :)

Keep Writing!

lokkish chapter 1 . 6/14/2007
that was beautiful i loved it!
Anonoumys spelling sucks chapter 1 . 3/4/2005
Freakin' awsome. Thats all I can say.
kori hime chapter 1 . 12/11/2004
Nice fic! I think I'll add it to my C2 community... Write more fics! Bye-e!~
Zelphie chapter 1 . 5/25/2003
Request: Please RR for Akirame Norwen on or Nakeneiri Itami on .
WufeiLover1 chapter 1 . 11/13/2002
oh great one*bows down to yukito the NM Syndromer* KINGDOM HEARTS RULES! do u have the game? if you do, do you think you could help me im stuck on the fat form of ersula from the little mermaid land. if you can help, review my story and tell me. if you like gundam wing then you might like my story. by the way really great story continue
lalala chapter 1 . 10/9/2002
awwww sooooo kawaii! i just wanna cry its so great. poor sora.
The Pezman chapter 1 . 10/7/2002
This is pretty good. I like Riku, especially once he turned evil. I like evil.
Trio da Maxwell chapter 1 . 10/7/2002
T-T ...
Maho Kiwi chapter 1 . 10/7/2002
WAAAAAAAAAH! *sobs uncontrollably for a few moments*

Okay! Okay...*sounding perfectly miserable* I am completely okay now. Jesus tap-dancing christ! I don't know quite what it is about this story that's so sad, heaven knows I've read sadder, more angst-ridden longer pieces...but *something* about this just makes me very sad. I think it's the birthday thing. And the Riku thing. So, it's very good...I don't think you can really take this story anywhere else [ah! I'm agreeing wiht muse!Riku, neh? ] so I wont advise you to write a sequel or anything...but maybe another story...meh heh...

So yes, I really liked your story! *tries really hard to ignore the cold stare from .5 of her muse team, shoulderangel!Ishuca(who reminds her that it's 4 am and there is a Government paper to be written) The other .5, shoulderdevil!draco, appears to be caught up in an "I'm an eviler silver-haired guy than you are" fight with muse!Riku...*[sorry for the misuse of your muse...]


Alex Warlorn chapter 1 . 10/6/2002
Enemies on the battle field, friends when not clashing swords, real wars are like that some times.
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