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SanSanna.67 chapter 20 . 10/13
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I think the clerk at the pokemon mart cheated us. Probably took one look at our clothes and decided he could get away with it. Mom says resale value is always lower, or something like that, but he only gave us 300 poke for it. That's – well, half would be 600, and half of that again is 300. That's just a quarter of what it's worth, right? That's not fair.

this is gold...
Saberas-67 chapter 10 . 10/13
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I do my best to help out, but I'm not strong enough or old enough to be worth hiring yet, so I mostly hang around in the sewers. Sometimes I can find dropped money or items. My biggest find was an ultra ball some stupid trainer must have left behind. When I first spotted it I thought I was dreaming, but I touched it and it was real. My next thought was that surely one of the trainers hanging around the place would spot it and claim it from me. If they did, how could I stop them?

Wow!
Misanisonnis.92 chapter 18 . 10/13
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I asked Mom why I couldn't be a pokemon trainer and she explained it to me. To get a "starter", like you see on those big TVs, you need to already have enough money to buy "basic training supplies" so that you can take care of the pokemon when you get it. Well, my dad does whatever work he can find on the docks and my mom spends every hour of the day she's allowed as a waitress at Cafe Sonata. We don't have that kind of money to spare.

I'm too curious
ShumrumphX74 chapter 25 . 10/13
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I stuck the ball in pocket, but it bulged horribly. So then I took my jacket off and tied it around my waist, the ball still hidden away in one of the pockets. I tried to walk as casually as I could. When I was finally up on the open streets I nearly laughed with relief. I didn't, though. If people start looking at you funny, nothing good comes of it. They don't want scum on the streets.

this is gold...
Sarra-6 chapter 9 . 10/13
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Here's the thing, though. I don't need a pokeball to make Champ come with me. I've told him all about trainers – the free food, free healing, the quick money. Also, unlike battles down in the sewer, trainer battles end when the pokemon are uncon – unconscious! He got all excited when I told him, chittered a whole lot, and gave me his biggest grin. Well, not exactly a grin, but he does this thing with his whiskers and ears that's basically the same.

Strange O.o
Tayloji-50 chapter 24 . 10/13
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It's late now, nearly time for me to run home so Mom and Dad don't worry. I'm sitting with Champ, and we're both thinking over our plan.

Give me a break :(
Lrah.13 chapter 13 . 10/13
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My best friend, Sammy, says I'm a whiner. She's right. I'm luckier than most of us: my parents have a house to rent when it's fall and winter, and I have a jacket. I love my jacket more than almost anything else ever. Well, I love Mommy and Daddy of course. I love, love, love Castelia cones even though I've only tasted them once, when the nice lady had some left over one day when it was cold and nobody was buying. But my jacket is the most pretty light blue, the color the sky's supposed to be like. The sky always looks gray here. Mom says it's the pollution.

Come on...
ThmaberX94 chapter 9 . 10/13
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I do my best to help out, but I'm not strong enough or old enough to be worth hiring yet, so I mostly hang around in the sewers. Sometimes I can find dropped money or items. My biggest find was an ultra ball some stupid trainer must have left behind. When I first spotted it I thought I was dreaming, but I touched it and it was real. My next thought was that surely one of the trainers hanging around the place would spot it and claim it from me. If they did, how could I stop them?

Come on...
Liruto.55 chapter 6 . 10/13
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My best friend, Sammy, says I'm a whiner. She's right. I'm luckier than most of us: my parents have a house to rent when it's fall and winter, and I have a jacket. I love my jacket more than almost anything else ever. Well, I love Mommy and Daddy of course. I love, love, love Castelia cones even though I've only tasted them once, when the nice lady had some left over one day when it was cold and nobody was buying. But my jacket is the most pretty light blue, the color the sky's supposed to be like. The sky always looks gray here. Mom says it's the pollution.

Cool!
Onni25 chapter 2 . 10/13
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And you know what? I think we can do this. I do.

Come on...
TriutantannisX46 chapter 14 . 10/13
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Here's the thing, though. I don't need a pokeball to make Champ come with me. I've told him all about trainers – the free food, free healing, the quick money. Also, unlike battles down in the sewer, trainer battles end when the pokemon are uncon – unconscious! He got all excited when I told him, chittered a whole lot, and gave me his biggest grin. Well, not exactly a grin, but he does this thing with his whiskers and ears that's basically the same.

Cool!
Lseirsei.64 chapter 16 . 10/13
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What is that?
Lnisnnis-77 chapter 17 . 10/13
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Here's the thing, though. I don't need a pokeball to make Champ come with me. I've told him all about trainers – the free food, free healing, the quick money. Also, unlike battles down in the sewer, trainer battles end when the pokemon are uncon – unconscious! He got all excited when I told him, chittered a whole lot, and gave me his biggest grin. Well, not exactly a grin, but he does this thing with his whiskers and ears that's basically the same.

Wow!
Sassukr-6 chapter 18 . 10/13
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What a beautiful piece of literatur.
Herfby.62 chapter 12 . 10/13
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Here's the thing, though. I don't need a pokeball to make Champ come with me. I've told him all about trainers – the free food, free healing, the quick money. Also, unlike battles down in the sewer, trainer battles end when the pokemon are uncon – unconscious! He got all excited when I told him, chittered a whole lot, and gave me his biggest grin. Well, not exactly a grin, but he does this thing with his whiskers and ears that's basically the same.

Impossible.
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