Reviews for A NEW START
ForeverMe65 chapter 17 . 6/24/2014
Great job. As this is your first fanfic I'll admit I could tell. The first few chappies were a little sloppy but throughout the story they improved. Your writing has grown throughout the story. I was impressed. Very different idea but I liked it. I can legitimately see robin doing that seeing as it was gradual. Great job! Keep up the great work
maskwolf chapter 17 . 3/3/2014
This one did great it had all the right material so do not think this one is not this one my tope 10 most favorite store ever
BartWLewis chapter 17 . 2/12/2014
Beast Boy is my favorite superhero, but your story make think of him as a dick, so good job.
JP-Ryder chapter 17 . 2/9/2014
Nice ending, Robin got his just deserts.
BartWLewis chapter 16 . 2/9/2014
Holy shit, come one, somebody do something.
ShepardisaBOSS chapter 3 . 1/26/2014
Serious Robin bashing here. Seriously, he is SUCH a douchebag in this story.
BartWLewis chapter 15 . 1/25/2014
I didnt think it was possible to think less of Beast Boy until your story, the way he is treating Raven.
Guest chapter 15 . 1/24/2014
Oh shit. It is going down! Please update soon!
BartWLewis chapter 14 . 1/22/2014
Cool story, hope you update soon. I feel sorry for Raven, BB broke her heart and even has the balls to invite her to his wedding.
zafnak chapter 11 . 1/15/2014
BB's parents were worth 358 million dollars when they died? LOL! Not bad for a couple of research biologists
zafnak chapter 3 . 1/15/2014
Jeebus. You turned Robin into a nasty prick in no time flat. Way OOC, even in fics that paint Robin
as super obsessed and borderline mental when it comes to Slade.

Honestly, you could have made him just angry that Slade escaped BB using cheap tricks, and have him berate BB for that, but really, calling him a slime bag and a green freak? Insinuating that his parents abandoned him for being worthless? A bit much...
Guest chapter 7 . 1/6/2014
Nice, mate! Very nice!
waterfire98 chapter 5 . 1/5/2014
I think you should have given Robin a time limit to join up with Slade so he has more time weigh his option's then come to Slade saying he will join. Just saying this is Robin he would at least attacked Slade even if Slade did not want to fight and second he would not agree to work with Slade so quickly unless there was some ones life was endangered more specifically Starfire's. I still love the story in including the BBxArgent
waterfire98 chapter 4 . 1/5/2014
cool chapter, but there are some things that were left out that I feel should have been there. Like when BB is asleep When did Argent come in and Argent could have remembered Raven and BB on the couch you kinda make her sad then have BB explain he broke up with her in the note which would let her know she had a chance that's all I have to say but still a good chapter keep up the good work
Guest chapter 3 . 1/5/2014
It about to go down. I love it
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