Fixing triton's name didn't work for the most part

Where in thr FUCK did that ending come from Jesus christ

W Gabe torture gotta lobe it

in the rewrite it would be great if you let Nico be gay. it's your story but none of the other characters are so it'd be nice if you kept the representation.

im absolutely sure Bianca and Nico are not twins.

why is your percy both stronger in some areas and a complete weakling in others like he's this prideful badass two chapters ago in indestructible armor then he's just letting Clarisse put his head in a toilet

isn't chaos the primordials mom ? how tf they over power her much less just tartarus who is a single primordial... alone... against an olympiad god and the creator of the universe... tf your power scale is so broken lol

bro
a fourth of light speed means he could go around the world in a second...
but cos this earth is bigger it would probably take him like less than 20 seconds still to go around.

Yeah sorry but I'm out, don't know what the plan was for the story since it's very old already but the start is close to unbearable with the amount of overblown Drama, contradictions of the MCs Character, the basic behavior of Characters and just Logic errors in general.
Also some edits and basic warnings would be nice.
I mean we have massive amounts of child abuse, rape, attempted rape of a child and that's only like the first 10 chapters or so, you warn about Gore but that is something different, especially because it basically didn't serve much in terms of plot later ( i case of the Rape, and attempted rape of a child). At least a warning would have been nice.
Overall the concept is nice and maybe it really gets better afterwards and lean's more into an action / gorefest, but there are just a few thing i hate in story's and overblown Drama that can be easily replaced with something else because it's just that generic and senseless Rape / child abuse for the shock factor are just two of the things that bug me.

when you said lemons, I was hoping Percy's lemons, not the other God's. lol

Lets gooo, he's back. I've read your stories for a good while now and all I have to say is keep up the good work!

nice great work

brooooo you're backkkkk... man this story introduced me to fanfiction since 2016 and I'd like to see how much you've improved and grown... welcome back mate

I thought you abandoned everything but good to know you are back!

YAY! Very excited to see what you change/improve!