It's all nice and good but...Grammar!

Loved it!

LOVE IT!

Loved it, I didnt like Toll dying as he is my fav but great writing :) hoping to read more of your stories soon :)

THANK U THANK U THANK U SOOOOOOO MUCH FOR KEEPING BILLY ALIVE ! :)
You're officially my new favorite person :)

This was a very good story.I am glad that Kate ended up with Billy.

Fuck yes! Rot in hell you bitch!

Aww...It's adorable! I can't wait for more action though.

O...m...g! You KILLED Toll! Oh my god! That is...wow. Great job. I mean that was totally his personality. He would give his life for anyone's in a heartbeat. Great job. And I KNEW something had to go wrong!

WOW! As much as I hate seeing characters die, I love it when writers take that leap and off them. It shows a sort of courage that is hard to muster up and can really backfire if done poorly. I'm interested to see where you go with this story, you've got me caught up in it, hook, line and sinker! Thanks for the fast update!

Wait...that's...no...that's...WRONG! Please you can't tell me anyone's buying this! Since when did anything go smoothly for the Expendables and what happened to Kate's bad feeling? There has got to be more to this am I right? This Silva is too much of a sleaze bag to just roll over like this so something has to back fire. That's it, there's no two ways about it. Something bad has to happen. And I'll be waiting for it when it does.

Besides my insane ramblings though it's really good. Love the story and I'm sure the plot line is still making progress behind the scenes. All of the characters are IN CHARACTER which is extremely hard to do but you seem to have managed fine. Great Job!

MiniCinnamon99

Hii the story is AMAZING. I love the relatiship very much, i cant wait till the update. Its marvelous. But could u please write more on qhat happend to Billy back in Albania? Thanks ur amazing keep it up :D

Can't wait for the next chapter to see her with the rest of the group:)

Hey I like your story
so please continue
because I want to read more chapters
xoxo Vera

Great chapter liking this story can never have enough expendables. Can't wait to see what happens next