|Reviews for Lightning Strike|
| janusscientes chapter 3 . 5/7/2018
It's all nice and good but...Grammar!
| Crystal-Wolf-Guardain-967 chapter 19 . 6/15/2016
| Erudessa-gabrielle chapter 19 . 2/4/2016
| Lady-Finwe chapter 19 . 8/31/2014
Loved it, I didnt like Toll dying as he is my fav but great writing :) hoping to read more of your stories soon :)
| Guest chapter 7 . 4/2/2014
THANK U THANK U THANK U SOOOOOOO MUCH FOR KEEPING BILLY ALIVE ! :)
You're officially my new favorite person :)
| Whitelion69 chapter 19 . 3/18/2014
This was a very good story.I am glad that Kate ended up with Billy.
| MiniCinnamon99 chapter 15 . 2/24/2014
Fuck yes! Rot in hell you bitch!
| MiniCinnamon99 chapter 14 . 2/20/2014
Aww...It's adorable! I can't wait for more action though.
| MiniCinnamon99 chapter 10 . 2/7/2014
O...m...g! You KILLED Toll! Oh my god! That is...wow. Great job. I mean that was totally his personality. He would give his life for anyone's in a heartbeat. Great job. And I KNEW something had to go wrong!
| PuddingCup30 chapter 10 . 2/5/2014
WOW! As much as I hate seeing characters die, I love it when writers take that leap and off them. It shows a sort of courage that is hard to muster up and can really backfire if done poorly. I'm interested to see where you go with this story, you've got me caught up in it, hook, line and sinker! Thanks for the fast update!
| MiniCinnamon99 chapter 9 . 2/3/2014
Wait...that's...no...that's...WRONG! Please you can't tell me anyone's buying this! Since when did anything go smoothly for the Expendables and what happened to Kate's bad feeling? There has got to be more to this am I right? This Silva is too much of a sleaze bag to just roll over like this so something has to back fire. That's it, there's no two ways about it. Something bad has to happen. And I'll be waiting for it when it does.
Besides my insane ramblings though it's really good. Love the story and I'm sure the plot line is still making progress behind the scenes. All of the characters are IN CHARACTER which is extremely hard to do but you seem to have managed fine. Great Job!
| Mariam chapter 8 . 1/30/2014
Hii the story is AMAZING. I love the relatiship very much, i cant wait till the update. Its marvelous. But could u please write more on qhat happend to Billy back in Albania? Thanks ur amazing keep it up :D
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/9/2014
Can't wait for the next chapter to see her with the rest of the group:)
| Lycanthrope Vera chapter 2 . 1/7/2014
Hey I like your story
so please continue
because I want to read more chapters
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/6/2014
Great chapter liking this story can never have enough expendables. Can't wait to see what happens next