|Reviews for Avocado is Not the Only Fruit|
| gilmoreintraining chapter 21 . 3/3
Great job on this story, sorry I meant to post a review on the next chapter, but I accidentally hit the button, so you get the review here, lol. I wonder who Esae is, I liked Rory's letter to Jess, I'm glad she finally wrote one, it seems like a letter that she may have written in Washington, but without mention of Logan of course. I can't wait for the next update.
| gilmoreintraining chapter 22 . 3/3
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| alaskanbackdoor chapter 21 . 3/2
I like how you portray Rory's lack of independence. She never truly gained any until she moved out of her grandparents house and did everything on her own. Even then, she may have had to somewhat easy. This is a very well written look into who Rory really is.
| Scarlet3086 chapter 22 . 3/2
This is one of my favorite chapters so far! I'm glad she wrote Jess, and was at least honest with herself if no one else.
| SA-fan 2011 chapter 20 . 2/28
Why does Rory have to make compromises, or rather sacrifice her own needs just to keep Logan happy, while he never wants to make any sacrifices of his own just to make sure that Rory is happy?
And even though I to some extend understand why Logan doesn't want Rory to see Jess anymore, why does everything have to be about what Logan wants?
Jess is right, Rory didn't sign herself away when she married Logan!
If Logan really loves Rory, he wouldn't demand her to be a certain way and change who she is!
I hope Logan's and Rory's vacation on Martha's Vineyard is going to be Rory's breaking point, since she now is going to be with Logan all day!
| anon guest chapter 20 . 2/28
I hope someone apart from Jess notices that Rory is acting different.
I feel sorry for Rory cause I went through a similar experience.
Let's just say I have trouble trusting men now.
| KM chapter 20 . 2/27
Fantastic as always! You just made my day! :)
| WesterbergGal chapter 21 . 3/1
This is developing nicely. The contrast between her conversation with Jess and her trying to confide in Logan, just so right. At first I thought you were portraying Logan very ooc (believe me, I'm no Logan fan...), but on second thought, I can maybe see hints of this side of him peeking out in the show. Left unchecked by Rory over the years, I'm beginning to see how our friends got here. Interesting - you've got me hooked!
| Scarlet3086 chapter 21 . 3/1
You're doing such a good jobs of making me want to smack Logan. I know I said it before, but I think you're writing Rory so well.
| gilmoreintraining chapter 20 . 2/28
Logan is so self-centered. I can't believe Jess kissed Rory. Great job on the last few chapters.
| KM chapter 19 . 2/26
Ahhh! More! I can't get enough!
| Scarlet3086 chapter 20 . 2/27
This is so sad, and that's good for the story because it should be sad so it means you're doing a great job. I can feel how trapped Rory it, how sad she is. It really jumps off the page.
| Lali chapter 19 . 2/25
I'm also intrigued about this Stu... Logan continues to behave like a typical abusive jerk, telling Rory what she can and can't do and 'fixing' everything with expensive jewelry and acting as if nothing happened. In the beginning of the story I may have seen him as remotely decent, but definitely not anymore. Hope that she works up the courage to defy him on seeing Jess...
Thank you for your writing, I'm always ecstatic to see a new chapter!
| KM chapter 18 . 2/23
Excellent chapter. I like how realistic this story is. I hate Logan, but I understand what it is to be depressed and in a bad relationship. I love your writing. I get so excited whenever I see a new chapter is up. Keep it up! :)
| Scarlet3086 chapter 19 . 2/25
This is really getting better with every chapter. Things are so wide open right now! You can do so many things...I can't wait to see what you do.