|Reviews for Friends and Foes|
| Carina chapter 6 . 6/8/2014
love Love LOVE IT! Keep up the freaking amazing work!
| Oracle2Phoenix chapter 6 . 6/8/2014
Hah! Wisteria... I love that...
I said it before, but it's so nice to see this image of Daphne, not the clichéd version every other author on the website likes to publish.
Looks like Harry and friends are about to enclose in on Slytherins again. I am curious as to what is going to happen, particularly whether you're going to have him go up against a Fidelius Charmed property.
Interesting notion, making Polyjuice and it's ingredients a controlled substance. Makes sense considering all the dodgy things one can do with it.
Love this and look forward to whatever you update next.
| Charybdis2 chapter 6 . 6/8/2014
Great to see another chapter up.
Each time I read one of your stories, I am reminded of just how "American" many other stories are and it brings the authenticity of your stories into sharp focus.
Lovely story, not a lot of action here but plenty to enjoy.
| keeptheotherone chapter 6 . 6/7/2014
I love seeing "famous" canon characters from an outside POV, and nice red herring with that Trio comment ;) All the description related to Sheriff Phillips had me laughing, especially with her being a woman. The dialogue in this chapter was great, both the conversation between the Sheriff and the Aurors and Harry and Ginny at the end: enough plotty stuff to keep the story moving interspersed with the things that really happen in conversations, like side comments about sports and making dinner.
Having had more than one patient reach threateningly for my stethoscope, I immediately appreciated the modification to the Aurors' tie-that's genius. Not only do you save the Auror's life, the suspect is already nicely restrained and said restraint is the evidence of their assault. I like it.
That's Lavender's main contribution to the Auror office-she knows stuff. And she knows how to find out stuff. Any other cleverness or fighting skill she possesses is just icing on the cake.
I'm sure I'm not the only person who has said/will say I would have liked to see the "interview" with Draco, but I defer to your authorial (wow, that actually appears to be a word!) authority and good judgement as to what benefits the story. Great update, thank you!
| aalens chapter 6 . 6/7/2014
Many thanks for this update - it was thoroughly enjoyable, as usual.
| Cypress98 chapter 6 . 6/7/2014
Yes! an update ;) I honestly missed you this past 2 months
| sgtmajorette chapter 6 . 6/7/2014
Chasing your latest chapters all over the Internet!
| GinnyPotter6891 chapter 6 . 6/7/2014
I'm really enjoying your story. No obvious mistakes or typos-yay! Looking forward to the next installation.
| Eemohlish chapter 6 . 6/7/2014
I got super excited when I saw you'd updated! :D I love all your stories, you're an amazing writer! Great chapter, all the drama, mystery, romance (i.e confused!Harry) and subtls hints I'm not quite clever enough to understand.
Keep up the amazing work! X :) xxx
| scrappy8 chapter 6 . 6/7/2014
| diva.gonzo chapter 6 . 6/7/2014
Once again, you outdo yourself on your chapter. I was enthralled reading this. The descriptions of the three Aurors stepping out at the Bailiff's office, and the mystery built in... Just ungh. Yeah.
But I also appreciate the small details you weave in, especially with Lavender, and Ginny's observations on romantic notions of bad boy outlaws. *snicker*
I think I enjoyed the interaction between Harry and Ginny best, from the mundane rituals for the athletes and their regimens for training, to the "Ginny had a good day at training" and the "left off page to the reader's imagination." Rather nice indeed.
As always, I look forward to more, at your leisure and opportunity.
| MHood80 chapter 6 . 6/7/2014
Great chapter! The exchange between Harry and Ginny was just great. The way Ginny takes control of the conversation is perfect. She's right and she forces Harry to see it. Great Job! Can't wait for more.
| ClaireBear1982 chapter 6 . 6/7/2014
Brilliant update sir! Go Ballycastle lol (I'm a Bat, Chaser 3) ;-) Oh Dung, you ruddy daft ha'porth fancy getting yourself caught! You better be of some use for a change. Keep going guys you'll catch them soon.
| yiota146 chapter 3 . 5/25/2014
And for that matter, Romilda already has Michael crossed off as well, she went with him to Harry's New Year's party in "Mistletoe Kisses". That leaves Dennis, Lee, Seamus, Dean, Ron (unless you count the love potion in HBP), Anthony, Ernie, Justin and Smith (if he counts as a DA member, well, he probably doesn't).
| yiota146 chapter 4 . 5/25/2014
As I'm re-reading this, it occurs to me that you had Terry being with Romilda in "Hunters and Prey", that is how she knew that Harry and Lavender were alone together and told the Prophet. That makes Terry another DA member crossed off her list. I'm looking forward to a new chapter!