Reviews for Friends and Foes
Cypress98 chapter 6 . 6/7/2014
Yes! an update ;) I honestly missed you this past 2 months
sgtmajorette chapter 6 . 6/7/2014
Chasing your latest chapters all over the Internet!
GinnyPotter6891 chapter 6 . 6/7/2014
I'm really enjoying your story. No obvious mistakes or typos-yay! Looking forward to the next installation.
Eemohlish chapter 6 . 6/7/2014
I got super excited when I saw you'd updated! :D I love all your stories, you're an amazing writer! Great chapter, all the drama, mystery, romance (i.e confused!Harry) and subtls hints I'm not quite clever enough to understand.
Keep up the amazing work! X :) xxx
scrappy8 chapter 6 . 6/7/2014
great chapter
diva.gonzo chapter 6 . 6/7/2014
*Enthusiastic applause*
Once again, you outdo yourself on your chapter. I was enthralled reading this. The descriptions of the three Aurors stepping out at the Bailiff's office, and the mystery built in... Just ungh. Yeah.
But I also appreciate the small details you weave in, especially with Lavender, and Ginny's observations on romantic notions of bad boy outlaws. *snicker*
I think I enjoyed the interaction between Harry and Ginny best, from the mundane rituals for the athletes and their regimens for training, to the "Ginny had a good day at training" and the "left off page to the reader's imagination." Rather nice indeed.

As always, I look forward to more, at your leisure and opportunity.
MHood80 chapter 6 . 6/7/2014
Great chapter! The exchange between Harry and Ginny was just great. The way Ginny takes control of the conversation is perfect. She's right and she forces Harry to see it. Great Job! Can't wait for more.
ClaireBear1982 chapter 6 . 6/7/2014
Brilliant update sir! Go Ballycastle lol (I'm a Bat, Chaser 3) ;-) Oh Dung, you ruddy daft ha'porth fancy getting yourself caught! You better be of some use for a change. Keep going guys you'll catch them soon.
yiota146 chapter 3 . 5/25/2014
And for that matter, Romilda already has Michael crossed off as well, she went with him to Harry's New Year's party in "Mistletoe Kisses". That leaves Dennis, Lee, Seamus, Dean, Ron (unless you count the love potion in HBP), Anthony, Ernie, Justin and Smith (if he counts as a DA member, well, he probably doesn't).
yiota146 chapter 4 . 5/25/2014
As I'm re-reading this, it occurs to me that you had Terry being with Romilda in "Hunters and Prey", that is how she knew that Harry and Lavender were alone together and told the Prophet. That makes Terry another DA member crossed off her list. I'm looking forward to a new chapter!
hoot48 chapter 5 . 5/5/2014
Interesting chapter; keep up the great work.
Brooke chapter 5 . 4/29/2014
Love this story, looking forward to next one. I like your idea about minimizing the use of memory charms on Muggles. One of my favourite things about your stories set after the war is that you've thought about how the Wizarding World has changed since Voldemort was defeated, and how it was improved, because just because the wizards don't use electricity doesn't mean their world can't change. Keep it up! :)
Anon chapter 5 . 4/25/2014
I love the backstory on Bobby. This whole idea of reducing memory charm's use and being legit is brilliant! You could build your own book series on it :)
hanname chapter 4 . 4/25/2014
Love this chapter. The interaction between George and Angelina is perfect. The betting game between the Weasley kids is very much in line with JKR. I love how your Audrey, she's usually potrayed as a bore, but I agree with you Percy needs someone fun. :) Percy deserves some good things happening to him.
bookandanimewriter chapter 1 . 4/17/2014
Hey,this is a very enjoyable read. Nice story!
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