Reviews for Suddenly, Mass Effect
Original Heartless chapter 1 . 2/3/2014
Strange...Garrus would most likely fake cough when things got weird. Not bad for first fic, I've always thought about doing an SI where you ARE shepard commander. If you want tips, I'm here to help. Good so far.
DylanZero chapter 1 . 1/8/2014
Hmm, a fair start. Not much to go on and hopefully we find out a little more about you (your character, whatever) and why you've been teleported into the game. Or anything. One thing I noted was you wrote Garrus nicely, he seemed true to his ME self and I think there's potential for big things with this story if you follow through with material. I've got my eye on this one.
XRaiderV1 chapter 1 . 1/5/2014
hmm, very well done. more please?
kiarainu chapter 1 . 1/4/2014
Normally do not read these stories, but I said "why not?" ... and where is Shepard? ... I'm confused.
Keep it up. :)