Reviews for Gundam Build Fighters: Moving Forward
ThisIsShade chapter 13 . 2/21
When will the new chapter be posted? Its really good
Hikaru Kurayami chapter 13 . 1/22
This chapter was frigging hilerious. Keep it up! :)
major wallace chapter 13 . 1/21
Twin Judge of Gemini chapter 13 . 1/21
Again, I think the quick haul is a bit too much, you bringing "psycho yandere girlfriend" thingy is not good in the doing, she become somewhat more like plot device, and showing that side of Kaede a bit too fast is not fun...

Aside from that, action is still good, battling the EFREED is extremely awesome, alongside the fact that Zaku-II Kai being said a pushover really stings, especially when I think of Zaku-II Kai I always thing of Berny... Poor hamburger...

Hope you won't do the fanservice stuff like harem, but who am I to talk that? Its your story, so I'm hoping that you can write even better chapter than this
Happy Writing,
Twin Judge of Gemini
DevilKingofFate chapter 13 . 1/20
Awesome chapter i was on the each of my seat throughout the entire chapter and it got me pretty emotional too with the flash back. And believe me the honor is mine for letting my story be based off of yours and you've made a lot of good series too so i can't wait for how the story will be finished. I hope you'll have an awsome year this year so good luck!
MangamanZX chapter 13 . 1/20
Thanks for the mention, loved the chapter, and I'm surprised you were worried about writing this one, I have to say this is one of my favorite chapters so far, I love seeing demon Kaede, and your references to the other works are a gem to read :)

Can't wait til the next exciting chapter... And the chapter where Kaede gets a gunpla... And the chapter where you kill off... I'll stop before this becomes a spoiler... Unless I'm making this up... Or maybe I'm not

#rip Vinny

DevilKingofFate chapter 12 . 10/28/2014
That was a really crazy chapter talk about mind blowing hahaha. Also I agreed with you on both gundam series G Recon seems interesting but so far nothing too special at the moment, but for Gundam build try that shit got me pumped! XD
Hikaru Kurayami chapter 12 . 10/24/2014
Twin Judge of Gemini chapter 12 . 10/23/2014
Good chapter, the story's tilting the crazyness alongside the fact that Isamu's social life is turned upside down, and the battle A Baou Que?

Another favorite is Char's Zaku-II, but its a bit no-fun when Vincent is the one that say "3 time faster" thing, more fun when Isamu is the one that say it himself

Anyway, hoping for more good chapter, good luck and happy writing
Major Mike Powell III chapter 12 . 10/23/2014
Well, well, soldier...

Hmmm...alright, this was interesting, quite interesting, yes...

So, we have Isamu adapting and quickly getting used to his new life, and I agree: he has come a long way, as we can tell by those 2 idiots, Buzz Cut and Tall Guy. LOL And also, dude, Isamu's inner monologues are absolutely hilarious. :'3 Dat shattering of the 4th Wall...Hell, Deadpool would be proud! 8D

And also, there was a big revelation here, from that crrrrrazy chick, Akari. So, she used to be in love with Isamu back in the day, and was there to witness his fall after confessing to Kaede...damn, man. She really has a silver tongue, with the way she riles up poor Isamu, huh? I don't like her. She's bad news, too.

And of course, there's the tension between Kaede and Isamu, especially after he meets that Tama-chan slut...sheesh...goddamn it, Kaede. But Hell, Isamu is no saint, either, simply walking away and stuff...these two really tend to run around in circles, don't they? :P

And also, dat ending! LOL

So, now, it's time for Isamu's greatest practice to date: 10 Zeon Mobile Suits...commanded by none other than a Red Zaku II. Ohhh shiiit, son! Isamu, time to channel your inner Amuro Ray! XD

Outstanding work, my friend! Keep'em comin'!
Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
MangamanZX chapter 12 . 10/23/2014
Akari is crazy...

And Kaede seems to be stepping Ina mine field... Based on your wierd obsession with ero magazines I'm guessing Kaede will be adding a few notches to her belt on this excursion -_-
major wallace chapter 12 . 10/23/2014
nice work
Kira Zero Yamato chapter 11 . 9/15/2014
Very nice, very nice indeed. Well written, good characters, good character building... This could easily be a Gundam Build Fighters side story novel for real. Only criticisms are these: Minor: Some minor typos here and there, but really this has the fewest of almost any fanfic I've ever read. Less Minor/canonical: Vulcans on Exia, GN-X, and any GN Drive based unit would be GN Vulcans, which are small rapid fire particle beam guns with multiple barrels. If you're unsure about any technical aspect of a mobile suit/gunpla check . They have a very complete list, in-depth technical information, and are generally more reliable than say .com on technical specifications because not anyone can edit MAHQ, and they're from official soruces on MAHQ . MAHQ also has tons and tons of variants from mangas and hobby magazines, if you find your self needing of ideas for units, or customs.

Anyways enough of that, this is really good aside from it's rather minor flaws this is amazingly well done, and absolutely one of the top fan-fictions I've ever read.
Twin Judge of Gemini chapter 11 . 8/5/2014
I really find this fanfic good, the main character is pretty like-able, he's realistic, and we all need a good Tsukommi for story

Anyway, its a bit disappointing that you use Astray as the main character's GunPla, at least I hope for Gold Frame or more 'unique' one(I'm not sad there will be no main character with Zaku or GM custom, I'm not...)

Still, I'm hoping you will continue this story, its really interesting and I love it so much,
Twin Judge of Gemini
DevilKingofFate chapter 11 . 6/29/2014
Dude that was fucking badass and I was on the edge of my seat the entire time. Awesome job dude.
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