Reviews for She knew
readicted chapter 2 . 4/7
Bella's POV was fun.
readicted chapter 1 . 4/7
This was very erotic and poetic. I love the rhythm of it, very evocative and visceral. Great job.
mybookloveaffair chapter 2 . 4/12/2014
This story is hot as heck. I like how Edward is so into the game that he convinces himself that he even thinks of Bella as his prey, until the ending. However, Bella knows it's a game and calls it that and how she pretends like she only does it for him so that he'll continue the game. I would pretend too if i was promised a tryst with Edward like that haha
abaith chapter 2 . 2/10/2014
Awe that was good.
slc6548 chapter 2 . 1/21/2014
This was really fun to read - thanks for sharing!
Just Sus chapter 1 . 1/18/2014
WHEW! What a game they play! That was f'ing HAWT! Wow, 137 years, and they still play games...awesome!

xoxoSus
Jackief1 chapter 2 . 1/17/2014
Wow! Really enjoyed this! Thanks for sharing!
Michaelmas54 chapter 1 . 1/12/2014
My laptop has just exploded ! Need I say more?
Edward'sDJ chapter 2 . 1/11/2014
Fabulous, thank you.
Edward'sDJ chapter 1 . 1/11/2014
Phew!
BridieM chapter 2 . 1/10/2014
:D
BridieM chapter 1 . 1/10/2014
Excellent story telling. Painted pictures and emotions bled into RL and escapism achieved. :D
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 2 . 1/9/2014
Very, VERY nicely done! Loved this.
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 1 . 1/9/2014
That was so hot!
I just... yeah. HOT!
dreamerwaking1 chapter 1 . 1/9/2014
Loved the story. It was erotic and sensual and very moorish. I was sure until the end that Edward was finding Bella for the first time, but as always you surprised me.

Great writing as always.
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