|Reviews for Sparks|
| TheDragonofNeptune chapter 23 . 4/3
look i love this but i think it would have been better if Merlin defeated her because if would show more the power of Emrys not just Merlin some happy go guy because even though he has his sister is not enough he is broken inside
| Guest chapter 10 . 3/10
jealous arthur this chapter, jealous marayna next
| michaelCCC98 chapter 1 . 3/7
this shit is lit
| Adele chapter 9 . 1/25
Need more mergana. This chapter was a start.
| Adele Chase chapter 2 . 1/25
hope to see alot more mergana. I do like Marayna
| TamashinoSuzume chapter 16 . 1/24
The ending of this chapter was really confusing. Did he kiss her or not, because on moment he's "leaning in" and saying stuff like "you have my heart" and the next he's saying he wish he could tell her? I'm getting the sentiment but I wish it was more clear I'm just really confused
| HerCrazyBookshelf chapter 13 . 1/5
Its so funny when Marayna walks away and makes Arthur speechless till he asks "How does she do that?"
| HerCrazyBookshelf chapter 12 . 1/4
I recently decided to rewatch Merlin and decided to read this also. I've about halfway through the book (or just about) and am completely hooked and don't want to set it down for class. Its always amazing how you include your original characters into the story and also how you manage to make your books like the show.
| hellspam chapter 4 . 12/21/2016
I'm kinda curious if you would be interested in doing a story for the Lucifer TV show when it finishes I ask cause it is so awesome and you can easily make your oc any angel that hasn't appeared its got two seasons and I've only seen 3 angels including Lucifer himself your oc could be Gabriel who's the youngest angel if I recall from religious stuff I've read
| Guest chapter 4 . 10/2/2016
Dammit I wanted Merlin to beat that motherfucker
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/2/2016
Aya is life! And Merlin my baby is actually good with a staff?
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/2/2016
Aha is awesome! But I do hope her magic will never be as strong as Merlin's...magic is the only thing that makes Merlin, Merlin and if somebody had the same level of magic as him it wouldn't be as special
| Guest chapter 16 . 8/18/2016
I really love this story, the story is great, Mara is one of my favorite oc and her relationship with Arthur is incredible but I hate the sais. There are hundreds of weapons, so, why that?
The possibilities that someone had that weapon and accept train with her to a girl are minimal, so, why would she want to learn how to handle a weapon that probablente never could have at their disposal are very low?
This is really the only thing that upset me a little because no exist no reason for not used , I don't now, daggers, or something.
Sorry for my horrible English, I'm Spanish
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/31/2016
Just wanted to say how much I love this chapter in particular, I really felt like I connected to Marayna more. The whole thing about regretting something you've agreed to but sticking it out anyway, no matter the outcome. It was super relatable and made me appreciate her more as a person rather than just a character. She really came to life!
| Someone chapter 20 . 5/11/2016
You do know that there can be 9 High Priestesses at any one time. Not just one.