|Reviews for Life of Percy Jackson (Pertemis)|
| Nonyaarb chapter 7 . 10/12/2019
Percy is a little ducking wuss. People are stepping all over him left and right, manipulating him and making him feel guilty for things he shouldn’t. Honestly I thinks love goddess is onto something there
| Guest chapter 64 . 9/30/2019
Really good story
| Guest chapter 31 . 9/4/2019
NO ZOE GAYY
| Guest chapter 30 . 9/4/2019
| ToxicGhost20 chapter 64 . 9/1/2019
Man I really loved this story
I would say you are just like Rick Riordan
But damn it feels so bad that there is no ending.
I hope youre still willing to end it.
Thank you for being such a great storymaker
| Guest chapter 23 . 8/29/2019
| Anon chapter 64 . 8/11/2019
It's too bad this story seems to be abandoned
| Anon chapter 5 . 8/8/2019
I'm not a huge critique of anything but really Percy killing someone is a bit much isn't it? His moral code wouldn't have him do it
| Winter chapter 39 . 8/8/2019
Honestly the way Percy and Artemis got back together is pure bullshit. She’s impulsive she would’ve pulled away from the kiss and slapped him or refused to go there in the first place and just flash out. Second of all Diana is too slutty.
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/23/2019
oooo damn Artemis boit saw some manhood!
| PrehistoriCreatorNP chapter 7 . 7/16/2019
NO PERCY X APHRODITE! JUST NO!
| PrehistoriCreatorNP chapter 6 . 7/16/2019
Percy would actually just condemn himself to solitary confinement, even for Aphrodite. Remember his fatal flaw? LOyalty. also the way he is he would have quietly left, and go to Alaska
| PrehistoriCreatorNP chapter 1 . 7/16/2019
Hey what could almost kill Percy? Death himself?
| Guest chapter 64 . 7/10/2019
There’s going to be a lot of people that will disagree with this but... I don’t like the idea of Percy becoming a God, being a Demi God is what makes percy, well... percy. Also since there’s never been a offspring of a goddess and a Demi-God, it would be very interesting how that would play out with Percy and Artemis, making a new breed.
| Mike924 chapter 14 . 7/9/2019
yes, yes there is. he is a grownnot quite) adult. he can bathe himself