Reviews for Elysian
Catheryne Keyleigh chapter 10 . 4/15/2016
Such a cute and heartwarming story! Hope to read new chapters soon :-)
TropicalRemix chapter 10 . 1/25/2016
please update this fic.
LoveInTheBattleField chapter 10 . 1/23/2016
Next, keep it coming. Happy New Year!
Nancy67 chapter 10 . 1/11/2016
Finally he admits to himself that he is attracted to Usagi and now she is the putting walls up. It seems Shingo's gang problems has put Usagi's life in danger and that is why she moved to Elysian to hide. Can't wait for the next update
Jenniiibear chapter 9 . 12/29/2015
I would love to see this story get an update. It is at a really interesting crossroads with where you want to take it. I have truly enjoyed the build up of the characters and their back stories and feel that this story has so much potential. I really do hope you update it again because I think this is one of your best fics.
animegirl73 chapter 9 . 11/1/2014
Cute story. More please
missscatterbrain325 chapter 9 . 10/12/2014
Finally managed to get back to this and now I'm left wanting more...I've told you often enough what a wonderful writer I think you are and I stand by it. The humour in this story is amazing. I was baffled at first when Mamoru's irritation went almost immediately to overprotectiveness but the heart doesn't always make sense, does it? It feels what it feels... I love the vulnerability in both characters, the instinctive trust usagi have for mamoru without realising it herself as well as his instinctive protectiveness of her, how it was easier to admit to the underlayer of attractions and insecurity than something deeper. Really, really curious how this will play out.
scatterbrain325 chapter 1 . 10/10/2014
Hi Shay! Sorry I’m not signed in for this review but this will be a quick one since there’s quite a bit to catch up work-wise after the BoO break. All in all, I think you’re off to a very good start. Right from the beginning, the detailing of the building itself is impressive. You wrote it in such a way I can imagine myself there and that set the scene of the story very nicely. And then there is the introduction to Mamoru. I can’t believe he failed his entrance exam the first time and for some reason that brought to mind Mama’s face when I got 80% for that law paper last year, remember? LOL. And then there are the other characters. It would figure that Mina would see through Mamoru’s facade! I love that! As for Usagi, after her first initial impression of Mamoru I half expected for him to have the same first impression of her during their first meeting. NOT! LOL. It works though. Can’t wait to wait the rest.
Thanks Shay!
-your scatter
Polly chapter 1 . 8/15/2014
I've read all your chapters and they're amazing! Really hope you update soon! Can't wait to read more :)
Guest chapter 9 . 7/25/2014
So awesome! Loving this story too! Like that your taking more time with Usagi and Mamarou. Still can't wait on up dates too both this and SS now! CelesSerenity
LoveInTheBattleField chapter 9 . 7/17/2014
Episode 2 of Sailor Moon Crystal airs this Saturday. Like, keep it coming.
Guest chapter 9 . 7/16/2014
Omg omg omg! This is so good! One of the best ones I've ever read, and i get around :) so good! You're dialogue is clever, the plot is fresh and I have such adoration for someone who uses correct grammar. It really does make the story more enjoyable. Overall, this is freaking awesome, please update! I love the slow progression and pent up frustration of their sexual tension...I feel it too! Lol
sailorpriestess chapter 9 . 7/17/2014
That was a really great chapter. I liked how darien was honest with her near the end of the chapter. I enjoy sweet darien but also enjoy cranky darien. I've always loved those types of personality. Seems like an ass whole but so sweet and passionate when you really get to know the person. Looking forward to the next chapter
epsilon beauty chapter 9 . 7/16/2014
Yes I had hoped that they would go on an actual date but I think this fits better. I like the way it ended up. Waiting patiently but anxiously for more.
Nancy67 chapter 9 . 7/16/2014
If I were Usagi I would be bashing Mamoru's head against the wall already while cursing him out. He is way beyond being a baka, hope to see the loving and caring Mamoru soon.
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