Reviews for Conceal and Reveal
DJ chapter 14 . 11/14/2016
You haven't wrote in a long time author! Keep writing!


I'm not sure if this is supposed to be used as a comment box so please bear with me!

Thanks for writing this amazing book,
DJ chapter 13 . 11/14/2016
Hi! I was wondering if you write jelsa on . It's a fan-fiction site just like this but WAY better. I think you will enjoy that one too. Not saying this is bad, this is great too!

The Crescent Rose chapter 14 . 12/9/2015
I know it's been forever since you've last updated this. But it's beautiful ; ; I hope the story is only sleeping...and not forgotten or dead.
jelsaforever chapter 14 . 11/30/2015
this is really nice...pls continue to update & write such awesome stories...
Blabbermouth chapter 14 . 10/27/2015
"JUST KISS ALREADY!" Gosh! It's been so freaking loooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnggggggggggggggggggggggggggg! Can't you just kiss already? Tho I like the fact that they we falling in lve slowly..
Tsuekasa chapter 14 . 5/22/2015
dont do this to usssssss
ThaliaofAvalon chapter 14 . 5/11/2015
Definitely keep writing! This story is amazing!
Serenity de la Luna chapter 14 . 1/21/2015
Aww. How cute.
Elizabeth Newsom chapter 14 . 11/26/2014
Wow, awesome story. You portray Elsa's emotions and feelings amazingly well. And you're writing is absolutely beautiful. It's eloquent, but is simple enough to flow well.
Elizabeth Newsom chapter 2 . 11/26/2014
Love your writing! It's very descriptive and picturesque and your story's realistic :)
ElsaSnowQueen21 chapter 13 . 8/1/2014
You are really good at writing and deserve all these reviews. Please update soon! From Elsa x
Mr. Invincible chapter 14 . 7/25/2014
I love this couple.
Guest chapter 14 . 7/1/2014
You are such a good writter I mean like this scene was so intense...just for takeing off a glove
JohnTitor chapter 14 . 6/19/2014
This was really neat. I like the friendships that Jack has. The one thing that threw me off was the powers. It seemed like a high school au to me.
JohnTitor chapter 6 . 6/19/2014
Wait what.

Are powers confirmed?
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