Reviews for Life Unlived revised
victoria cullen34 chapter 17 . 9/5/2014
good chapter so for I love it a lot and I cant wait for a new chapter to be put up and more
Raven Lockwood chapter 17 . 9/5/2014
Aww ... I shall miss this. It was very sweet. I'll just have to go check out your other stuff, won't I? :p
Raven Lockwood chapter 16 . 8/29/2014
:D ... nicely done. Can't wait to see the results. :)
victoria cullen34 chapter 16 . 8/28/2014
good chapter so for I love it a lot and I cant wait for a new chapter to be put up and more big time
victoria cullen34 chapter 15 . 8/18/2014
good chapter so for i love it a lot and i cant wait for a new chapter to be put up and more big time
Raven Lockwood chapter 15 . 8/17/2014
Liked it very much. :) It's sweet, but not sappy. Just right. :)
Guest chapter 14 . 8/9/2014
Awe YAY
readingaddict24 chapter 14 . 8/7/2014
great work
victoria cullen34 chapter 14 . 8/5/2014
good chapter so for i love it a lot and i cant wait for a new chapter to be put up and at little girl is ssssoooo cute in this story big time and wow twins i bet Severus family has some twins in he family at he does not known in this story big time
Raven Lockwood chapter 14 . 8/3/2014
What a lovely wedding! :D Sad to see the epilogue coming and this story will be over :( ... But I suppose I'll just have to wait for your next work of art. ;)
shadow-kissed angel chapter 13 . 7/30/2014
Aww they're so cute. Update soon!
Guest chapter 13 . 7/25/2014
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!
Raven Lockwood chapter 13 . 7/25/2014
Oooooo ... you keep giving us these lovely chapters and I'll be happy to give you lovely reviews. :D I love when Sev gets a real chance for happiness. :)
victoria cullen34 chapter 13 . 7/25/2014
good chapter so for i love it a lot and i cant wait for a new chapter to be put up and man you think severus would wait little longer in this stroy like been dataing a year in this stroy put ho will if whateds to ask now ats ok big time
Guest chapter 11 . 7/23/2014
The first time he used an endearment was at Christmas time and it went unnoticed. Other than that small mistake you are perfect. Don't respond I don't know how to read them. Bye
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