Reviews for Lines
kassad1234 chapter 1 . 3/19/2014
This is good. really really good.
adventure time idiota1 chapter 1 . 1/8/2014
happy birfday!
sammansonrepilica chapter 1 . 1/7/2014
Awwwwwwww soooooo adorable
Eve Harp chapter 1 . 1/7/2014
I hate writers block too
KF fan chapter 1 . 1/6/2014
This is good.
My only reservation is the revolving first person perspective, but I much prefer the way you handled the transitions to that "Jinx POV" stuff that so many fanfiction writers use.
Zinnia99 chapter 1 . 1/6/2014
This was reallly good. I liked it a lot. Please make it longer.
Pixies Between The Pages chapter 1 . 1/6/2014
Good job! Very nice story! I especially love the last bit!
LSpeedyfangirl chapter 1 . 1/6/2014
This is a really cool, and well laid out story. You should definitely add more to it!