|Reviews for Pitch Black|
| josecullenforever chapter 1 . 2/18
you can't leave the story there! you have to continue! you are evil :( please make at least another chapter
| Talia-Naeva chapter 1 . 5/13/2015
Wish you had added a paragraph or two more where they age to get an appt ;)
| japanloveroffood chapter 1 . 2/15/2015
AMAZING!• I LOVE IT CAN THIS BE AN MPREG. Oops I was in caps lock. But seriously mpreg would be cool and is it going to have mystrade in it? Please update soon Kay.
| softballaddict11 chapter 1 . 12/3/2014
Oh please, please, PLEASE write another chapter!
| interstellarroadkill chapter 1 . 11/24/2014
| Dragon of Selene chapter 1 . 10/20/2014
It's more than okay.
| Raxicoricofallapatorious chapter 1 . 10/18/2014
This is such a wonderful start. I cannot wait to read more. :) The concept is original and the characterizations are spot on.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/6/2014
PLEASE KEEP WRITING OMG
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/27/2014
Please continue! This is really interesting
| Derek-L-J-Sohma chapter 1 . 6/18/2014
Awesome! Can't wait for more!
| Gabwolfgirl chapter 1 . 6/17/2014
This is a really cute story. I like it a lot.
| alessa-vulturi chapter 1 . 4/19/2014
| Dramatic lamp chapter 1 . 4/8/2014
ugh i loved it
| KimikoAmaya chapter 2 . 4/2/2014
Meanest April Fools ever! I stared at my screen in shock for a whole 30 seconds before they drifted down to see the A/N.
| RainyDays-and-DayDreams chapter 2 . 4/2/2014
Oh my god. That's a way to end a chapter... I nearly had a freaking heart attack. Just.. Oh my gosh. Wow. Please update soon- I need more. Love, Rainy