Reviews for Uzumaki Tsube
dismissedspace46 chapter 14 . 7/11
what's the new version called
Guest chapter 8 . 6/10
Ignoring flamers or trolls doesn't keep your story from sucking it just sucks try a rewrite or don't I've stopped caring.
arckane chapter 2 . 6/5
narutos gonna be way underpowered tho compared to a super sayan goku and the enemies coming like cell and what not
ebay778 chapter 6 . 6/2
what happened to the saiyan avenger
kevin chapter 15 . 5/24
more please
xXxnarusasuxXx chapter 11 . 5/21
I like.
Maedre chapter 1 . 5/21
5'6 is impressive where ?

Throwing hiraishin kunai and teleporting looks like a much slower way of travelling then running/ shunshin/ chakra cloak.
Guest chapter 5 . 5/16
You make saiyan sissy race

Saiyan is brutal, savage, fighter race
Goku is exception, bcause he treated well, get love and get trained on earth and get insomnia at young age. While naruto get ditch by kurama yet befriend it, get used as jinchuriki, treated unfair yet still protetect those people?! And kurama, he change his resemblance to his birth parents just for amusement!, i think you go to far for naruto idiocy level! And HE NAME HIS SON FOR HONOUR KURAMA AFTER ALL HE DID?!
what next? Save frieza after kill both his parents?

Man, this fuckedup
CHANGE HIS RESEMBLANCE TO BARDOCK!
HIS BIRTH PARENTS

That is unexceptable!
Burn kurama to hell if he really did something like that!
What if someone change your face?! Erase all resemblance to your parents!
Guest chapter 3 . 5/16
You make saiyan sissy race

Saiyan is brutal, savage, fighter race
Goku is exception, bcause he treated well, get love and get trained on earth and get insomnia at young age. While naruto get ditch by kurama yet befriend it, get used as jinchuriki, treated unfair yet still protetect those people

What the point you make naruto from saiyan race but not became super saiyan?!

Go make drama fanfic elsewhere, drama not suite on dragon ball
Killjoy3000 chapter 2 . 5/11
excellent
HellsMaji chapter 3 . 4/5
Where the hell are all these links you keep talking about in your stories? There's only like 4 links in your profile, none of which are about anything I've read so far.
willfant chapter 12 . 3/30
One Punch Man is named Saitama not stamina
Dkadarkness chapter 15 . 3/16
fuck man! update this already!
david.teague.3950 chapter 4 . 1/12
Something I don't get with people who use Temporal Displacement chambers. If time inside the chamber is accelerated wouldn't the people inside them age? For example(if I ever get around to working on the story): Naruto along with a pretty Saiyan Lady are taken to Uzushiogakure no Sato, or rather what's left of it. There they find a special chamber that utilizes Biju chakra as a power source and for every year inside the chamber a month takes place outside so Naruto under the Tutelage of Mito Uzumaki whom he used Edo Tensei on received 6 years of training from her in a combination of Arts namely Fuinjutsu. During this time in which he went from being a short 13 year old(let's face it all Saiyans are short until the reach the year before their 18th birthday in which they finally begin to grow) to being 19 and due to the displacement of the chamber he actually grows. Once his training with Mito is done he takes a couple days to recuperate and acclimatize from the time displacement, then he alters the gravity seals that he placed on his Saiyan associate making them 4 times more powerful so that each individual seal goes up to 40 times gravity. With that tended he goes back into the Chamber this time with his partner and they train their bodies in energy manipulation and because both Naruto and Fasha(the same saiyan lady that was on Bardok's team) are wearing 2 sets of weights identical to the weights Lee was wearing I'm gonna assume it's 100 kilograms, that's 220 pounds on each arm and leg, add in the gravity seals which increase gravity up to twenty times with each seal, of to which only five can be placed, meaning a total of two hundred times gravity. That means that both Naruto and Fasha have 440,000 pounds on them once they reach maximum gravity. Now my intentions is for Fasha to end up having a Nightmare a month before their time in the chamber ends and Fasha goes Super Saiyan she'll then spend the last month learning to control it. Naruto too will go Super Saiyan but only during the Pein invasion where he kills Konan and Nagato but before he blows their bodies apart Kurama persuades him to take Nagato's eyes so and have them transplanted into him which is what Sakura does after that all the bodies are placed into Storage seals for burial at a later time, only once Naruto's adjusted to having the Rinnegan he takes the scroll containing Kakashi's body and uses the Rinnegan to take his soul from the other world and revive him. He does this to Shizune and everyone else but does it slowly so as to not cause irreparable damage to himself.
david.teague.3950 chapter 1 . 1/12
Not sure if I've already posted for this chapter but a heads up, Goku and Raditz's mother's name is Gine not Sharotto, who might I add is an OC made by a member of Fanfiction. I believe that Goku/Kakarot was as violent as he was due to the Saiyan conditioning of his Saiyan Space Pod when he was an infant. Once he hit his head though the conditioning was wiped clean and his real personality, that of not wanting to kill his enemy and always giving people a second chance, that he got from his mother(she was said to be passive, that is she hated fighting, and was too kind to be a proper Saiyan). Bardok Goku's father was a proud warrior, he fell love with Gine and didn't care for the fact that she was weak in the eyes of others, but most importantly he cared about his friends just like Goku does.
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