Rainy Day (revised)

Disclaimer: None of these characters belong to me, though I wish they would.

Summary: Jun'ichi is thinking about Marina on a rainy day. There's someone at the door, it's Marina. But why is she here? Where's Kenta? It's supposed to be Backshipping and there is some Questshipping but my aim was Backshipping.

Note: This is all after the Raikou incident, Kenta and Marina are dating. Their ages would probably be around 15-18.

I was sitting on my living room couch, staring at the screen of my television. I hear the pitter patter of the rain against my window but I wasn't watching what was on the TV. I was thinking about her again. God damn it, why did she have to go with him?



Crap, the electricity went out. Oh well, not like I was watching TV any way.

*knock knock knock*

Who the hell would be outside in a thunder storm?

I walked through the dark room, careful not to trip on anything.

*opens door*

"Marina?! What are you doing here?"

Her face was all wet, and it wasn't only because of the rain. She ran into my arms and started crying. I enveloped her in a hug.

"Let's go to the living room, I'll get you a towel so you can dry off."

I felt her nod on my chest. I grabbed my spare flash light hanging off the wall and we ventured our way through the dark.

Marina sat on the couch, her eyes were staring out into space and her body was shivering.

"I'll go get towels, stay right there."

I placed the spare flash light on the table so she wouldn't be left in the dark. I wonder what made her so upset.

I came back with some towels and another flash light. She seemed to have calmed down a bit.

"Here, dry yourself off, wouldn't want to get a cold, would ya?"

"Thanks." She replied weakly, taking the towel and started to dry her hair.

It was silent, so I tried to start a conversation. "So...Marina, what happened?"


"You wouldn't be running out in a thunder storm for nothing would you?"

She was quiet.

"I'm sorry, you don't have to talk about it if you don't want to, but it would be better for you if you didn't keep all your problems locked up."

She sighed then started to speak.

"Me and Kenta were always together, always happy. But then a few days ago, he always seemed to be missing. Every time I called him, he's busy, when I try visiting him, he's not there. I think he's ignoring me. Then this morning, I went to check on him. He wasn't there but I waited until he came home. When he did, he was very surprised to see me. I asked him where he was and he refused to tell me. We got into a fight so I ran off. I didn't know where to go. Then it started raining so I came here since I was in the neighborhood."

I stared at her. This was all Kenta's doings... How dare he make her upset! He will pay! Then I noticed that Marina started crying again. I pulled her to my lap and gave her a hug. She soon fell asleep. I looked at her face and wiped a tear off her cheek. I then fell asleep.

The morning came, and the sun's rays shined in my eyes. I woke up and remembered what had happened yesterday. Where was Marina? The lovely smell of pancakes filled the air, and it came from the kitchen.

"Marina, what are you doing?"

"Making breakfast, you don't mind if I used your kitchen do you?"

I shook my head. "What are you making?"

"Chocolate chip pancakes."

"Oh, okay, I'll go brush my teeth first."

"Okay" She said and went back to her pancake flipping.

I was about to go get some breakfast, when the phone rang.

*Ring Ring Ring, Ring Ring Ring, Phone call, Phone call*

I picked up the phone, and the screened turned on.


"Hey, morning Jun'ichi, Marina doesn't happen to be there does she?" He looks worried and apologetic.

"No" I lied.

"Hey Jun'ichi! Aren't you going to eat our breakfast?" Marina yelled from the kitchen.

"That wasn't Marina, was it?"

"Uh, no." I looked nervous.

I heard a clang and noticed Marina had set a place of pancakes in front of the screen.

"Hey Jun'ichi, you have to try some, these are good."


She looked at the screen, then was about the run away from my video phone.

"Marina, wait, I'm sorry."

She looked back at the screen. I stood up and let her sit on the chair.

"Marina, look, I'm sorry. I know I've been ignoring you for the past few days but I have a good reason for that."

Marina didn't say anything. He continued.

"I noticed that your birthday was about to come up so I decided-" He didn't get to finish because a giant blue claw shoved him out of the way. "Feralligator!" "Ow! What did you do that for?! Oh, um, anyway, Marina, I helped you evolve your Crocanaw into a Feraligatr."

Marina was speechless. Then she smiled and looked like she was about to cry.

"Kenta...thank you...and I'm sorry too... I just love Wani-Wani's new look!" Her eyes were all sparkly-like.

I watched as the two talked. I smiled sadly, she would never look at me like that. Never. I went to the living room couch again and just sat there.

I guess Marina finished her talk with Kenta.

"Bye Jun'ichi! I'm leaving now! Oh yeah, and don't forget to eat the pancakes!"

I heard the door open, followed by a slam. The door opened again and she walked up to me and kissed me on the cheek.

"Thank you for everything Jun'ichi."

She smiled and then left. I turned on the TV and just stared at it. I'm alone again.

Yep, that's the revised version. It's still not good, and I kinda changed Jun'ichi's personality. He's less angry and knows that Marina and Kenta are together and he can't change that. And also, I changed her supposed Wigglytuff into a Feraligatr. I just saw the Raikou Special a few days ago, that I realized her Jigglypuff wasn't the only one that dances. And it takes time to evolve a Croconaw and none to evolve a Jigglypuff. Please give some reviews, maybe even flames if you hate it that much. And I might make a dubbed version of it.