I'm sorry, but I just can't continue this story.
I feel like I did a fairly good job, considering I had never actually watched MLP, and was basing everything I knew from other Fanfics and fan made videos and pictures, and the Wiki, but in the end I just can't continue anymore.
I didn't know that the Zebra only spoke in Rhyming couplets and considering my mastery of the English language is rather poor, and I am as white as a snow, I just can't rhyme. So I wouldn't have been able to continue without killing a character that I am around 80% sure that people really liked. And as time went by, I lost interest in continuing this story.
It is up for adoption if you really want it, but I cannot continue.
Again, I am sorry.