So, for those of you who have been waiting, (see' s an empty room and sighs) I've finally gotten around to rewriting the Betrayal. I had been hoping to completely rewrite it before posting, but my muse up and ran off with another story, so I'm posting what I've done so far and moving from there.
I've also rewritten Zaire's Military service record into a more Codex like story, with new notes and story details added. It's now called Scars Not Physical - information n' stuff.
Another thing! I've finally gotten around to thinking up a name for my universe. So anything with Scars Not Physical in the title is part of this universe.
So, feel free to look though my profile page and check out the changes :)
I'm going to bed now. It's 1 AM and I'm probably going to have to edit everything again in the morning.
Edit: so it's 12 o'clock the next day, I read though this again and was surprised I didn't spell anything wrong or forget anything majorly important, but I'd thought I'd just put up that the holidays are coming up for me in about five weeks, and I'll be doing a bit more writing then. I'll probably also try to finish one of the ten or so half finished one shots I've got in storage to post then as well.