Part II is finally here at last! I have a pretty good idea about what I'm doing but still have a few loose ends to patch up.
Hope you enjoy!
Saturday, October 26th 1985
"Sorry Marty, I forgot to tell you. You're all waxed up ready to go for tonight. Here's the keys." Biff said and went back to inside.
"Keys to what?" Abby asked.
"Only one way to find out." Marty said and the two went to the garage. Inside was the black 4x4 truck that Marty was admiring earlier that same day.
"No. Way." Abby said. Marty couldn't believe and went to inspect his so called car.
"How about a ride mister." A voice said. Marty turned around and saw Jennifer standing there.
"Jennifer. Aw man are you a sight for sore eyes." He said going over to kiss her.
"Marty, you're acting like you haven't seen me in a week." She responded.
"Are you okay? Is everything alright?" She asked feeling his forehead. Marty turned around and gave a look at his parents who were watching and walked away from the door. That's when Jeremy came back out to get another box but an old photo book fell out. Abby immediately went over and helped him with picking it up.
"Yeah." Marty said now. "Everything's just great." He was about to kiss her again when a flash and loud crash was heard. The two quickly turned around and saw a really big DeLorean pull up with a back seat installed. Out came Doc wearing a red shirt, a plastic tie, a yellow coat, and some kind of shades. Abby who heard all the commotion came over with Jeremy.
"Marty! You and Abby have to come back with me."
"Where?" Abby asked.
"Back to the future!" Doc said now pulling up his shades. He then went to the trashcan and started going through it. The group then came over to where he was.
"Wait, what the heck are you doing Doc?" Marty asked.
"I need fuel." He said pointing to the box labeled Mr. Fusion. "Hurry up you two. Get in the car!"
"Whoa whoa hold up Doc. We just got here, Jennifer's here and we're gonna take the new car out for a spin."
"Well bring her along. This concerns her too."
"Wait a minute Doc, what happens to us in the future? What do we become ass***** or something?" Marty asked.
"Oh no no no no you and Jennifer turn out fine. It's your kids Marty. Something has to be done about your kids."
"Abby what the heck is going on?" Jeremy asked.
"I don't know to be honest."
"Oh this must be Jeremy. You can come along too if you want but it looks like you have a lot of unpacking to do." Doc said.
"I actually just got done. I'm in the mood for some adventure anyway."
"Well hop in then." Doc said and they all got in the car with Abby and Jeremy sitting in the newly installed back seat and Jen sitting on Marty's lap.
"Hey Doc you better back up, we don't have enough road to get up to 88."
"Roads? Where we're going we don't need, roads." Doc said and started the flying car.
"Hey Marty! Marty I wanted to show you my new matchbooks for my auto detailing that I printed." Biff said coming out of the house. That's when he saw the DeLorean start to fly and take off.
"Is that a flying DeLorean?" He asked himself before the car took off and disappeared.
"What the hell is going on here?"
LaurenHardy13's version of Back to the Future II
In just a few seconds, the car slowed down with a bunch of other flying cars heading full speed at them making everyone in the car scream except Doc who immediately drove out of the way.
"What the hell was that?" Marty asked still holding Jennifer.
"Taxi cab I thought we were flying." Abby said.
"Alright Doc what's going on? Where are we? No wait when are we?"
"We are descending upon Hill Valley, California at 4:29pm on Wednesday, October 21st 2015."
"2015? So we're in the future?!"
"The future Marty what do you mean the future?" Jennifer asked.
"Is this some kind of joke?" Jeremy asked from the backseat.
"Uh…Jennifer…Jeremy I don't know how to tell you this but…you guys are in a time machine."
"A time machine out of a DeLorean?" Jeremy asked.
"Basically." Abby answered.
"I keep saying if you're gonna build a time machine why not do it with some style." Doc said.
"So this is the year 2015?" Jennifer asked.
"Wednesday October 21st 2015."
"Wow! Marty we get to see our future! Doc didn't you say we were married?"
"Yeah." Doc said looking like he just spilled the beans.
"Was it a big wedding? Marty we get to see our wedding and I can see my wedding dress. And we get to see our house! I bet it's a big house with lots of kids…so how many kids do we have?" She asked before Doc pulled out some type of invention which knocked her out.
"Doc! What the hell are you doing?!"
"Relax Marty. It's just a sleep-inducing alpha rhythm generation. She was asking too many questions and no one should know too much about their future. This way when she wakes up she'll think it was just a dream."
"Well then why'd you bring her?"
"She saw a time machine I couldn't just leave her alone with that information."
"She only just found out what it was." Abby said.
"It doesn't matter. What's done is done."
"Please tell me you won't use that thing on me." Jeremy said a little nervous.
"Not unless I have to."
"Whatever you say uh…Doc."
"Sorry, we haven't officially met. Doctor Emmett L. Brown." Doc said holding his hand out behind him.
"Jeremy Comings…but how did you know who I was before?"
"Well…let's just say you and Abby become really close in the future."
"Makes sense. We do live next door." He said and the DeLorean pulled into an alleyway.
"You two have to get out and change clothes. Jeremy you stay put."
"You got it."
"You mean change right now it's pouring down rain." Marty said.
"Wait five more seconds." Doc said after looking at his watch. True to his word the rain stopped and it was a clear, sunny day. "Amazing. Too bad the post office isn't as efficient as the post office."
"I used a disguise Marty. I was afraid you wouldn't recognize me." Doc said pulling some kind of tissue material off his face but everything looked the exact same as when he had it on. "So how do I look?" He asked giving a smile.
"Uh…you look great." Marty said and turned around to look at his surroundings. "The future. This is incredible I gotta check this out."
"There's no time Marty we're on a very tight schedule."
"So tell me about my future. I know I make it big and all but give me the details."
"Marty no one should know too much about their own destiny."
"Right. But I am rich right?"
"Marty take off your shirt." Doc said going back into the car and getting something. "Now put on the jacket and shoes. We've got a mission to accomplish." Doc said and started running down the alleyway with some kind of camera binoculars. There he saw a kid that looked like Marty walking down the street looking at girls. After Marty had put on his Nike lace up shoes and red jacket, Abby came out from behind the trashcan wearing a small sea green short skirt completed with brown belt, a white speckled shirt with gray short boots.
"Ok, this skirt is way too short for me." Abby said.
"Well that's the style now Abby." Doc said.
"I think you actually look cute." Jeremy said.
"Gee, thanks Jeremy." She said back now blushing.
"Hang on, this jacket doesn't fit." Marty said and Doc came running over and pushed a button on the jacket
'Size adjusting…fit.' The jacket said and it fit Marty perfectly.
"Pull out your pant pockets. All kids in the future wear their inside out. Put on this cap too." Doc said putting on a tie-dye hat on Marty. "Perfect. You're the spitting image of your future son. Help me move Jennifer over here." Doc said and Marty went over and laid her on a platform filled with boxes of .
"So what's the deal?"
"In exactly two minutes, you and Abby are going to head down to the Café 80s."
"One of those nostalgia places but not done very well."
"How hard is it to ask someone about the 80s who lived through it?" Abby asked.
"Well teens now a days are more focused on what's happening on Social Media more than anything so it doesn't surprise me."
"What the hell is Social Media?" Marty asked.
"You'll find out in a few years. Now go into the café and order a Pepsi. Here's a fifty for you two. Once there wait for a guy named Griff. He's going to ask you if you're in or out for tonight. You say you're out and just walk away. That's it! Don't do anything, don't talk to anyone, and don't touch anything. Just get the job done and get back here. Understand you two?"
"Sure we got it." Abby said.
"But I thought you said it has something to do with my kid."
"It does. Look what happens to your son." Doc said pulling out a newspaper. The front page talked about Martin Mcfly junior was arrested for thief.
"Oh my god he looks just like me. Within two hours of his arrest, Martin Mcfly junior was tried, convicted, and sentence to fifteen years in the state penitentiary?!"
"They did all that in two hours?" Abby asked.
"The justice system is really swift now that they've abolished all layers."
"Man this is heavy."
"Yeah and it gets much worse. Next week your niece attempts to break him out of jail and she gets sent up for twenty years."
"Wait, I have a niece?"
"Is that my daughter?" Abby asks.
"Yes it is. See what I'm talking about? This one event causes a chain reaction that destroys your entire family."
"But this is tomorrow's newspaper."
"Exactly. I've already gone ahead to see what happens and calculated the one event that sparked all of it. That's why we're here today." Suddenly Doc's watch started to beep. "Damn I'm late."
"Late for what?"
"Never mind that. Just go to the café and tell Griff no."
"Alright. Here we go." Abby said and the two walked into Hill Valley 2015 leaving Doc and Jeremy in the car.
Hope you guys liked the first chapter. I can't believe we are in the year 2016 and I still don't have my hoverboard yet. Also I don't know about you but I personally don't wear my pant pockets inside out. I'm still trying to figure out Jeremy's character a little so he may not be as involved in the story too much but we all know what happens to him and Abby in the future.