So I have realized that I don't like the way this story is going. This was one of the first stories I really got into when writing it and I think I just got way too excited to put all of my ideas into a story.
In saying that there are a few things I can do and I need help deciding.
I can rewrite the story without the magic. And still work on this version the way it is as well.
I can just rewrite it and not have this version anymore.
I can start from scratch and redo the story and use all of those ideas in more future stories.
I really need you opinions on what I should do. I also want to know if would still be read and I want to know what everyone thinks of the story. Anyway please give me some ideas if you have others. I would love to hear them.