this is mi 1st storie so pls be nice to me! I'm working hard an tryin to spel gud and I'm editing now. Thank u to Ponybird for bein nic because Moon Is a gud name. That oter reviewir wuz being a hater!
this chapter is kinda short cuz i wanted 2 get it out more quickly! ill try to make teh next 1 longerrrrr :D
The lite shined into the warriers den and onto dremfeathers face waking her up. She blink her violet eyes open and yawn locking around. She wasnot so used to bein in tis den yet. She has just barely become aprentice like a week ago and then just a couple days ago she becomes a warior! But she new she deserved it. She was a gud fiter and proofed herselve to her clan and leder.
"Every cat gather!" she herd a yodel from her leder! She springed up and paddled out of tha den wit every1 else who was just sleping. All the cats went in a circle and sat to listen.
"Today lakekit (LOOK MORGAN THEIR U R LOL xD) will be a aprentice! She is now lakepaw and her menter is stonefang!" the leder said. Lakepaw liked stonefang shoulder and then every one chered for them and screamed and then the ceremony was done.
"We r going on patrol" sayed stonefang coming up to dremfeather. "Lakepaw is coming 2 and beebreeze."
"K" said dreamfeather. she was exsisted to go on patrol.
"Um can daintypaw com to?" ask lakepaw locking at dremfeather's sister sister, daintypaw, and lakepaw always want to spend time together.
"Not today" said stonefang making lakepew look a bit sad but then they all left.
Dreamfeather got in front of stonfang, lakepaw, and beebreze as they walked. She was a strung fiter and smart so she want to keep every1 safe and she led the patrol. Suddenly she smell something familiar! It was a handsome smell she knew. OMG CROWPAW! She thought. WHAT IS HE DOING HERE.
"I smell a mouse!" dreamfeather screamed! "I will go catch it for the clan bcuz we dont have much fod today yet! Go a head!" everyone keep walking and she dashed off.
She spotted crowpaws red eyes in the bushes! "Wat r u doing here!?" she hised stressedly. She didnt want him to get caught!
"I need to tel u something importent!" he whispered. "Shadeclan is goin to atack and fite ur clan! Deathstar wuz talking with nightshade and my mentor brokensoul and they decided they want moor teritory!" he cryed. "I didnt want u 2 get hurt!"
OH MY STARCLAN. Thought dreamfeather. I have to warn my clan b4 its too late!
Arent u glad i put u in morgan? I told u i would xD hop u like it!
Wat will happn next?! Stay tuned 4 teh next chapter!