DEDICATION: To my English/Home Room teacher for putting this up on the wall and for letting me do an essay on Mary Sueism... I don't think she even knows who Mary Sue is. I copied it for the good of the world of FanFiction.

DISCLAIMER: Since I know that someone will ban me cause this would normally not have a plot, so I added Juliet writing a story. I don't own Juliet. End of story.


Juliet posted her wonderful story on Now all she had to do is wait for all the lovely reviews!!

**Next Day**

Juliet opened her e-mail, and amazingly she got mail!! The subject read: [] Review Alert! She happily opened the E-Mail, but then her face fell. The reviewer was Mage Kitty, and all she said was that she should follow the Writing Checklist. A couple spaces down, there was a copy of the WONDERFUL Writing Checklist. Juliet, frowning, read it.


Don't use no double negatives.

About them sentence fragments.

Try to not ever split infinitives.

Verbs has to agree with their antecedents.

Between you and I, case is important.

Correct spelling is essential.

When dangling, watch your participles.

Use your apostrophe's correctly.

Avoid clich├ęs like the plague.

Don't use commas, that aren't necessary.

Proofread you writing.

'This is crazy! When you read it, none of it makes sense!' Juliet thought. But Mage Kitty also said that her writing looked like this. Juliet opened her file with her glorious story and read it over. Juliet was ashamed. Her story sounded worse than the Writing Checklist.


Hehehe... This is pointless, I know. But I had to find SOME way to put this up, right, right? Anyway, I have a question for EVERYBODY!!!! And when you answer it, could you leave your name/pen name (Anyone who has an account, please sign on so I know that it is really you talking and not someone else pretending to be you!) and allow me to use your comments for my essay on Mary Sueism for school? Please, I wanna put quotes in it ^^ Anyway, the question is: What do YOU think of Mary Sue? Please answer, I really want this!