Sup guys, Lighting Wolf here, back with another story, this one about MLP. Enjoy the 1300-word chapter. I don't own MLP, Lauren Faust, Hasbro and a few others do.
(Ponyville, Shortly after Storm King invasion.)
The figure continued to adjust the cloak he was wearing it, a brief flash of metal poked out from the cloak: A crown that rested on his head as he continued walking.
He was a prince from a country called Hayland, and he was on a mission from his parents.
"I really wish they could have come with me…. Not that I mind being out of the Empire… But I hope Sprint and North Star can take care of Tampa Neigh while I'm gone…"
The prince muttered before a noise cut him off, he turned to see a Pink Earth Pony behind him.
Before he could say anything, she spoke up as loudly as possible, making the Prince fall down the hill he was standing on and land in a heap at the bottom at the hill as he spit out a small piece of dirt.
"Hi, I'm Pinkie Pie, your new, aren't you? Welcome to Ponyville!"
Pinkie said as the Prince shook his head before standing up.
"Ow… You surprised me… Anyway, I'm Crimson… Crimson Burst… Prince and ruler of Tampa Neigh…. I'm looking for Princess Twilight Sparkle… You wouldn't happen to know where she is would you?"
Crimson asked as he stood up, before he could say anything, the young prince was being dragged at speeds that only a speeding Pegasus would be capable of.
"OH, MY HAY, SHE'S MY BEST FRIEND, YOU NEED TO MEET HER, I'LL SHOW HER TO YOU!"
Pinkie yelled as she dragged the Prince to the castle as Crimson simply blinked.
Twilight sat at the friendship map, handling some papers that she planned to bring to Princess Celstria when the doors to the room as she blinked and nearly jumped as Pinkie Pie and a Pony that Twilight could see was a Stallion clad in robes.
"You dragged me… At 80 miles an hour… The whole way here… Pinkie… Why?"
The Stallion said as Twilight was about to speak before a bouncing Pinkie Pie cut them both off.
"HI, TWILIGHT! THIS IS CRIMSON BURST, HE'S A PRINCE FROM A PLACE CALLED TAMPA NEIGH! HE WANTED TO TALK TO YOU, I'M GOING TO GET A PARTY READY FOR HIM! BYE!"
Pinkie screamed out as Crimson winced at how loud the Earth Pony was before she sprinted out of the room so fast it nearly created a tornado.
"Ow… That… Was…. Loud… Anyway, she's right… I'm Crimson Burst…. Almost everyone calls me Crimson… As Pinkie pretty much shouted to the world, I am a Prince from Tampa Neigh… Well, ruler of Tampa Neigh… My parents wanted me to come talk to you… So, uh…. Here I am?"
Crimson sheepishly said, smiling awkwardly said as Twilight was about to respond when a large gust of wind, one Twilight guessed was from one of Rainbow Dash's Sonic Rainbooms as Twilight and Crimson covered their faces.
When Twilight turned back to Crimson, she gasped in shock.
Crimson's cloak had blown off, revealing sliver armor that covered his legs, back and chest. Crimson's red piercing eyes looked at her as she stared at his wings and horn that were clearly visible without his cloak, his ashy coat, reddish black mane only made him more shocking, his Cutie Mark was a potion with a fire under it.
Crimson was an Alicorn.
"Your…. Your… YOU'RE AN ALICORN!?"
Twilight yelled as Crimson looked at his body in shock before spotting his cloak on the table as he looked around in shock before sighing as he nervously nodded.
"Yes… I am… Please don't yell that? I didn't want the others to find out."
Crimson said as Twilight, who was still in shock as she circled the Alicorn Prince at speeds Crimson couldn't even begin to imagine as she began asking questions.
"WHAT'S TAMPA NEIGH LIKE, HOW DID YOU BECOME AN ALICORN, HOW MANY MALE ALICORNS ARE THERE WHERE YOU COME FROM, HOW LONG HAVE YOU BEEN A PRINCE!?"
Twilight began to ask as Crimson blinked, Twilight was looking at him more like a science experiment then a pony, he felt shy around her, he just couldn't place his hoof on why it was that he was acting like it.
"Uh, your majesty? I thought my parents would have sent you a letter… You being the ruler of Equestria and all that?"
Crimson said as Twilight blinked and crashed into the table in shock as she looked at Crimson.
"What? I'm not the ruler of Equestria, Princess Celstria and Princess Luna are… I'm only the Princess of Friendship."
Twilight said as Crimson's eyes expanded as Crimson sighed and looked out the window.
"Dang it mom and dad…. Sorry, my parents are being on information… Anyway, yes, I am an Alicorn… My parents wanted me to come here…. They wanted a peace treaty with Equestria… I'm guessing they didn't do a lot of information digging before they sent me here… They never do it seems… As for your other questions… How about I answer them on the way to… You said it was Celstria and Luna? I need to talk to them…I would have come with more of a retinue… But I wanted to keep a low profile… I heard Equestria just went through an invasion?"
Crimson said as the two Alicorns regarded each other, Twilight could clearly see Crimson was partly warrior, he still looked shy around her, clearly not used to talking to someone like her.
"Sure, I'll send a letter to Princess Celstria and get the rest of my friends, your love them!"
Twilight said as Crimson nodded, confused before he understood what she was saying.
"Right… Sorry, you talk to her… I'm going to talk to North Star… He's a… I don't have many people close to me… Sprint and North Star are people close to me."
Crimson said as Twilight smiled, making Crimson smile but blush back as he walked to the window as his horn glowed as a cauldron appeared as Crimson pulled a potion out of his cloak with his magic as he poured it into the cauldron as a Blue Unicorn with teal eyes appeared, his Cutie Mark that showed a group of sparks showed up lastly.
"North, can you inform my father that I've made it to Equestria… And tell him that his information was wrong, Twilight isn't the ruler of Equestria… Celstria is… He messed up… Again… I won't be back to Tampa Neigh for a few weeks… You, Sprint and the council is in charge of things until I get back… Ok?"
The Alicorn said as the Unicorn nodded and smiled as he looked around the castle.
"Will do, your highness… I mean, Crimson…. Can you get a souvenir? I would have come to Equestria but the scientists and magic schools of Tampa Neigh would be lost without you… I'll be sure to send some of the Golden Wings to Equestria… Sprint would understand."
North said as Crimson nodded and puffed the potion and cauldron away as he rolled his eyes, he turned back to Twilight and started walking over.
Phew, first chapter is done! Yes, Crimson is a Alicorn and also, Tampa Neigh is a name I got from online… As for Crimson? He is going to be in the show from Season 8. He and Twilight are going to be getting closer to each other… Also, let me know if I should be updating this story every other Tuesday or so, I have a Bleach, Rwby and Star Wars story on the way and I don't know which to update a lot. Until next Tuesday, Lighting Wolf out!
PS: Next chapter will show Crimson meeting the Mane Six.