I'm just not interested in fixing this up, it's full of cliche's, plot holes, bad writing. I thought about rewriting it, but frankly I'm more interested in writing other stuff than fixing this. Maybe one day I will come back to it, but for now this story is abandoned. The only reason I am not deleting it is because I know lot of people remarkably liked this. So to everyone who did. Thank you.
Edit: 8/24/21 I have been dmed and have agreed to allow Kingdark to rewrite this fic. They have permission.