Basically two versions of essentially the same thing. I'm just indecisive.


Version one:

You get dragged to the mall by an acquainted who tries to help you dress better. Inside the clothes store you wander off. Suddenly the store seems to turn maze like, seemingly going on forever. When you go looking for a way to get out you catch glimpses of movement in the corner of your eye.

"Did that mannequin just move?"

Then suddenly you feel a presence behind you. As you turn there's no one there. But then you hear your fashion sin get hissed in your ear from behind you. "Crocs!" Tendrils surround you and then everything goes black.

The next morning there's a new mannequin proudly displayed in the store, dressed in the latest fashion from an unknown clothing line.

Somehow these clothes always ends up becoming the newest hottest trend.

.._

Version two:

You get dragged to the mall by an acquainted who tries to help you dress better. Managing to lose them you flee to the food court where you of unknown reasons get really tired and fall asleep. Later you wake up to a the mall dark and empty of people. When you go looking for a way to get out you catch glimpses of movement in the corner of your eye. Eventually you wander into a clothes store which seems to go on forever.

Then suddenly you feel a presence behind you. As you turn there's no one there. But then you hear your fashion sin get hissed in your ear from behind you. "Crocs!" Tendrils surround you and then everything goes black.

The next morning there's a new mannequin proudly displayed in the store, dressed in the latest fashion from an unknown clothing line.

Somehow these clothes always ends up becoming the newest hottest trend.


What do you think?