Update: After several years away from "Once Upon a Time" I've found that the story is not going in the same direction that I had originally intended, my writing style has changed and I am in a different place emotionally myself.
I still have several unfinished/unedited chapters from "Once Upon a Time" but currently I have decided to leave this story and go in a new direction. My new story, "Lost and Found," is a revamped version of "Once Upon a Time." The first few chapters of both stories are very similar, with mostly just small editing changes, but you will see larger differences as I move further along with "Lost and Found."
As always, I am a review junkie. Let me know what you want and I'll see what I can do.