"Talk"=speaking
'Talk'=thinking
[talk]=me talking, mostly making little comments
{talk}=my yami talking, I'm not joking I really have a
split personality. Thou you don't see it mush.
*action*=an action
[Hey People,
This is my first Inuyasha fanfic, if a mess up on
something tell me.] {Ya, and she's really bad at it}
[*pulls out a mallat and hits her yami on the head*
wistals innocently- Well enough of that on with the fic.]
If I owned them why would I be doing this, so don't sue.
Kagome's Promise
It was just another quiet and peaceful day in the
forest named after the hanyou , Inuyasha, that was
pinned to the God Tree for 50 years.
"Sit!"
*Thump*
"Bitch!"
[Well I did say it WAS quiet and peaceful, you didn't
expect it to last did you? If you did, well you were wrong.
Why don't we go see what's up with Inyasha and
Kagome.] {HAHA, stupid inu!} [Why you laughing]
{He got sat.} [Oh, OK.]
"Bitch, you aren't going home we still need to find
shard of the Shikon no Tama." yelled but who else but,
Inuyasha.
"Inuyasha, I have to go home, I've got to study and
finals are coming up. Please, Inuyasha, let e go."
complained Kagome.
"No way, wretch, your not leaving for your tests.
Your going to stay here and look for shards. Kikyo
wouldn't leave before the jewel was complete." said
Inuyasha with a snort. Just then he sees Kagome's face
and starts to think, 'Oh, no I'm going to be sat big time
this time, how stupid can I be, why can't I tell her, why?'
Kagome's face turned really sad, then angry {Now
lets all back away from the scary lady, that way we're no
where near Inuyasha when he's sat.} and last but not
least she opened her mouth to say the magic word
{literarily}, then she closed her mouth. {What no
sit?}[shakes head- No sit.]{pouting -Well that ruins my
fun.}
"No, Inuyasha, no fighting." She whispered,
"Inuyasha, I'm going home now and I'll be back by next
week, after that I can stay for a mouth, understood?" she
said slowly, as if talking to a kid.{Which she is.}
With that in his head she jumped in the well
disappearing from the fedual era and going 500 years in
to the future.
[Now that you've read it review and tell me if it
was good, also you can give advice for later on in the
story if you want. Now REVIEW!!!!! 'Cause I no update
till I get 10 reviews.]
'Talk'=thinking
[talk]=me talking, mostly making little comments
{talk}=my yami talking, I'm not joking I really have a
split personality. Thou you don't see it mush.
*action*=an action
[Hey People,
This is my first Inuyasha fanfic, if a mess up on
something tell me.] {Ya, and she's really bad at it}
[*pulls out a mallat and hits her yami on the head*
wistals innocently- Well enough of that on with the fic.]
If I owned them why would I be doing this, so don't sue.
Kagome's Promise
It was just another quiet and peaceful day in the
forest named after the hanyou , Inuyasha, that was
pinned to the God Tree for 50 years.
"Sit!"
*Thump*
"Bitch!"
[Well I did say it WAS quiet and peaceful, you didn't
expect it to last did you? If you did, well you were wrong.
Why don't we go see what's up with Inyasha and
Kagome.] {HAHA, stupid inu!} [Why you laughing]
{He got sat.} [Oh, OK.]
"Bitch, you aren't going home we still need to find
shard of the Shikon no Tama." yelled but who else but,
Inuyasha.
"Inuyasha, I have to go home, I've got to study and
finals are coming up. Please, Inuyasha, let e go."
complained Kagome.
"No way, wretch, your not leaving for your tests.
Your going to stay here and look for shards. Kikyo
wouldn't leave before the jewel was complete." said
Inuyasha with a snort. Just then he sees Kagome's face
and starts to think, 'Oh, no I'm going to be sat big time
this time, how stupid can I be, why can't I tell her, why?'
Kagome's face turned really sad, then angry {Now
lets all back away from the scary lady, that way we're no
where near Inuyasha when he's sat.} and last but not
least she opened her mouth to say the magic word
{literarily}, then she closed her mouth. {What no
sit?}[shakes head- No sit.]{pouting -Well that ruins my
fun.}
"No, Inuyasha, no fighting." She whispered,
"Inuyasha, I'm going home now and I'll be back by next
week, after that I can stay for a mouth, understood?" she
said slowly, as if talking to a kid.{Which she is.}
With that in his head she jumped in the well
disappearing from the fedual era and going 500 years in
to the future.
[Now that you've read it review and tell me if it
was good, also you can give advice for later on in the
story if you want. Now REVIEW!!!!! 'Cause I no update
till I get 10 reviews.]