So I know I stopped this story but I want to rework some things. I kind of lost interest in Stargate after Jack left. I know that's not the best thing that I've done but you know how it is.

Anyway I'm going to be editing and reworking it chapter by chapter. Adding a thing here and there and making it more mature. I hope that if I'm still on your alert list you'll mail me and:

Tell me what you think.

Tell me what you would have liked to happen

Just to hear from you!