John, thanks for telling me about the mismatch. This is the third time I upload and change the chapters so I hope the new files are really there. There were few problems with the download manager (my account was locked), but the last time I checked the new stuff was correct.
Thanks for reviewing, but I'm afraid the chapter that follows the story isn't finished yet. I'm working on some earlier chapters concurrently to make them easier to read and will give the story a better continuity (I hope :-). None of the new stuff changes the main plot so you really don't have to read it if you don't want to, but I'll be glad if you will. I've been mostly just adding or deleting few sentences, however there are some bigger changes:
-There is a short new chapter about Buffy on Tauri during her memory loss called Behind the Lines.
-The chapter End justifies the means is gone. It was necessary for a subplot about a major battle between slayers and Apophis, which I abandoned so I deleted it, because it was one of the week chapters anyway.
-The chapter Hide and Seek is about four times longer now. First time I didn't really use the potential of Dawn being alone on an enemy planet. The new text is mostly Dawn's spy stuff about how exactly she tried to find information about Buffy and Bauer (the General working for Kinsey), which was very interesting to write, because Dawn isn't a witch or a slayer so her only weapon is the fact she's smart. I might be adding another chapter about Dawn versus NID so I'd appreciate if you read this and tell me what you think.
That's it for now. Enjoy the new texts. Byes.