Wow, Thanks for all the reviews for mistakes I was like WOOOOOOW the like the story. SO this is the sequel, I've wrote like three different beginnigs leading to three different plots but I like this idea most.
I HAD LOADS WRITTEN HERE THANKING YOU FOR YOUR REVIEWS BUT MY SISTER HAS GONE AND DELETED IT ALL. THANKS ALOT!!!!!!!!!!!! SO I'LL HAVE TO BE BRIEF SO I CAN GO STRANGLE HER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
What Would You DO? Review Replies
KhakiBlueSocks- Thanks It does sound good when you listen to the song and then read the story. Don't worry about finding it funny no offence taken it could have been deep or funny and I'm glad you found the funny side of it (unlike my sister when she thought it was funny to delete my work!!!!!!)
WaterGod=Fake-HeyIHateAllOfYou- Thanks short and sweet
Dorkiss- thanks for all your reviews in both my digimon stories. u
Kawaii-Q- Thanks girl you have supported me in all my fics and I'd like to say a BIG thank you to you. Sorry If you got confused, it ended up that Tai was dreaming about the Sora being a hooker and woke up just in time to stop her making the mistake. Also I'm sorry for not reading your latest stories but I've been tied down with drama and school work and I know thats not a suffice reason but I will read them when I get the chance. U
KaguyaEvenstar- Thanks yeah Tai was dreaming. I'm glad the song matched the story! w
Dark Metal Angel Of Destruction- Thanks I'll think about that!
Savoan Locc- Wow a story of mine you liked!!!!!!!! Cool!!!!!!!!!! Thanks for the jyora pictures very erm...... Interesting. Oh yeah you said you'd seen all the digimon movies and that the were all totally sorato-fied but in Diaboromon strikes back there are references to both TAIORA and SORATO!!! :P
Tai's Girl- Woooooo go ENGLAND!!!!! Thanks girl v
Agumon 2004- Thanks for the encouragement in writing my fics u
Quittakingmyname- Thanks but some people do flame and like I said there entitled to do that. We pyro's must stick together! o
Superchickandthegroovyanimals- thanks I'm glad you got emotional. .
MISTAKES CHAPTER 16 REVIEW REPLIES
I got so many reviews that I thought I's say thanks to you all for taking your time to review and that you all put a big smile on my face those people are-
Helios (thanks for your opinion on the Tk/Kari marrying I should have gone for a Dakari shouldn't I? I was going to but I was scared Takari people would beat me up!)
Digidestined Of Courage
Inconnu (I have wrote another fic completely different to MISTAKES but will post it after this fic okay?)
THANKS YOU GUYS I HOPE YOU LIKE THE SEQUEL
I suggest to any of you that haven't read MISTAKES to read it as this is the sequel and correct me if I'm wrong but its logical isn't it?
Sequel To Mistakes
The Lost Child
Chapter 1: The Lost One
The night brought its usual uneasy darkness which consumed the surroundings leaving the little girl squinting to see her scratches on the wall. Placing the stone onto the ground next to her she could hardly see her pictures, for you see for the past two and a half years she had crawled around the digital world hiding in caves much like this one.
"Mmm, mmm, mmm." She began to hum, she never knew what she was humming just a tune she knew well from somewhere, where she had a purpose but that was a long time ago.
She sat placing her hands around her knees which were constantly being bitten by the cold where her dress didn't quite cover. It was an old tattered pink dress, which once must had been elegant, she had found it floating down a stream, one of her earliest memories. It used to drag on the floor, not practical but would keep her warm at night, but constant running from Tiranamon and other unfriendly monsters had caused it to rip and tear.
"Mmm mmm mmm mmm mmm." She continued trying to fill the silence which made her nervous. Outside she could hear the footsteps of the monsters, in all her years she had never found one she could trust they either treated her with contempt or attacked this is where she learnt she was alone and almost whished the Tiranamon would hear her and eat her and put her out of her misery.
"Hello child." A sweet voice trilled startling the little girl.
"Who are you?" She asked backing away as the figure entered the cage, the light just bright enough for her to make out an outline.
"Me I am alone." It whispered walking towards the child.
"I am too." The five (and a half) year old whispered excited at the prospect of a companion, her lonely days meant she did not know of friendship just that two people travelling with each other means they are not alone which is what she wanted.
"I have been watching you and protecting you." It trilled coming closer placing both hands on the little girls shoulder.
"You have, does that mean you like me?" She asked surprising it by hugging its legs never had the monster thought it would be so easy.
"Yes, you see that drawing there." The monster soothed picking the girl up and pointing to the cave wall.
"Uh huh, I drew it all by myself." The girl said grinning.
"Well I'll be her and I'll look after you, I won't leave you." It said already things seemed to be going well.
"You won't. You won't." The girl replied burrowing her head hugging it tightly.
"No for you see, if you come with me you'll never be alone again. You don't want to be alone do you?" It trilled.
"No. No. No." She said shaking her head, at the prospect of being alone again.
"Come, we shall leave this place." It trilled exiting the cave clutching the girl tight as it prepared to fly.
"Okay." She whispered softly, smiling as she felt herself leave the ground.
Back in the cave as the sun slowly rose, the drawings became visable, to anyone who would enter the cave they would see the scratchings of a stick man and woman holding a childs hand, but the child wasn't the little girl it was another child with straight hair opposed to her untamable locks. If the person or digimon decided to take a further look at the pictures they would see the self portrait of a little girl with the tattered dress holding her hand up to someone who wasn't therewho was holding onto the other little girl how she had wished to be held.
But I guess the digimon or person wouldn't recognise the untamable hair on the head of the man or the way the womans hair was shoulder height and curled at the bottom.
But I guess the digimon or person wouldn't have known these where the scratchings of a desperatly lonely child.
A child without memory,
A child who they thought was lost,
A lost child,
To Be Continued
So what do you think? Let me know then I will improve, I love to hear all comments and Flamers are opinions too. Sorry if I rushed into it a bit but I wanted the story to be at a good pace you know so it doesn't dry up halfway through a chapter.
Hope you enjoyed the beginning.
. sorastarchild .
P.S I've written 6 out of a possible 13 already but I'm so hyped I have to post it now or I will die of suspense!