Or divine intervention
Doesn't matter, his heart had still died
Betrayal in his past
A broken heart to last
His emotions, away were cast
No one to break the seal
Locked on his human heart
Yet came a girl, girl who dared to feel
That his heart could be healed
So she assigned herself a part
In destiny's art
She set out to (and succeeded)
In healing a hanyous aching heart
So close your eyes
See love's demise? It's not happening this time.
And I can see angels in the sky
This time they don't cry
Tears of sorrow (pity) anymore.
A Feudal Fairytale, with a happy ending this time
And a girl who changed time.
Interpret as you will. Old-ish poem, with a style I don't use often... meh. Kinda horrid, but oh well. Review if you want, flame if you want, offer cricticism if you want... I'm more a reader than a writer, so all will be welcome. Personnally, this seems an InuKag to me, but I don't care if it's InuKag or InuKik. I just thing this is more likely or the two (no offense). IY and Kikyo didn't trust eachother enough first time around, and now there's a whole load of guilt, anger, and hate in the way. Kagome is almost like what Kikyo would be if she had trusted IY more. Just saying...