-- Love is all that –
A/N : hey everyone! This is my second fanfiction! I hope you all like it!
Oh yeah! And before I forget R&R and tell me who the evill villian that comes up later on should be...it has to be a girl but it can't be kikyo or kagome or sango. Think EVIL!! Yes this is a kohakuRin pairing but be warned there is a ..ok a happy ending with a twinge of sadness in it..
The sad defeat
"Ha! And you call youself strong?" Kanna smirked , "I guess humans will never stand a chance against youkai –ever!" Kanna had been sent by Naraku to give Kohaku a test to see how strong he really was, but he failed. Suddenly Naraku appeared beside Kohaku who was a bloody mess leaning against a tree stump. "So you did fail. Well then I have no use for you seeing the only things you can kill are other humans." Naraku said coldly , "Well I'll be taking back my jewel shard and just because I pity you, I'll give you your life back...or whatever is left of it!" Naraku laughed evilly as he plucked the shard from Kohaku's back. All at once the paion hit in, Kohaku could do nothing but lay there and watch Naraku disapear into the depths of the forest. "Even though I have the rest of my life back, I guess I'll live the rest of it here." sighed Kohaku. Kohaku tried to ignore the pain as he fell asleep.
Theres a little bit of it to see if I should continue or not...and if I do I think I'm going to limit it to short paragraphs like these because there so much easier to write and it gives me more time to think. Anyhow R&R to tell me if I should continue! Bye!