BSA: Okay people, it's up to youâ€Should I start thinking and add on to this story? Or should I leave it at this and try better next time? It's your choice! So choose wisely! Now addressing the reviews

Black Angel of Destruction:

Thankies for the support! hands you a plushie I give you my prized kagetsuya plushie!

HieiWannabe:

You know you got a pointâ€I was reading over the story last night and it probably would have been better if I had a more descriptive reasonâ€â€next time I will think about that moreâ€and I will be sure to work on my spellingâ€â€I'm in a marching band and I had just got back from one of our late games so I was really tired..

And consider yourselves both on my favorites list for being the first to update! Let me know what you think I should do and I f you have any ideasâ€.please fell free to let me know.