To our dear and loyal readers:
Ereshkigalgirl and I have been working towards converting Pirate Princess into an original piece of fiction. To that end, we have begun editing and reworking PP to exist in the world we're slowly creating.
This process includes creating new characters, improving old ones, including never-before-seen scenes and dialogue, and generally improving the overall plot, structure, and pacing of the story. However, we realize that that both our work-frazzled brains aren't enough! (Yep, we've both just stepped into the scary corporate world of business). So we humbly ask you for your help by contributing ideas or critiquing PP (as you remember it, although it'd be nice if you re-read the whole thing!).
If you had in mind a subplot/scene that you thought would but didn't play out – let us know!
If you felt that there were loose ends that weren't properly tied up or subplots that weren't explored to your satisfaction – let us know!
If you felt that some scene was out of place, out of character, or just plain odd – let us know!
If you felt that some subplot/scene/character etc. was superflous - let us know!
In short, we want to hear what you think and feel about our baby! Please do so by clicking on the "Review" button below. There is no limit to the number of reviews you can submit! The reward for your efforts would be a new and improved, revamped version of Pirate Princess that we hope to get to you shortly after Gypsy Queen completes its fanfiction run (We intend to put it through the same 'originalizing' process once its complete).
Thanks so much for your help!
FelSong & EreshkigalGirl
AKA. Felicia & Carly