Good evening, folks!
While I am currently stuck –not writer's block stuck, more along the lines of "how to get the pictures in my head into words" stuck- I'd like to ask for a little feedback, if I may.
I know that over the (many) years I've been writing this thing, my writing style has shifted slightly. Does it still flow well all together? It's very hard to tell, looking at it from my angle.
There are a few swear words in now, and slight suggestion of naughty-ness coming up. I don't expect I'll have to bump the rating up. Where we stand now, I would let my teenager read this, if I had one. If it ever gets too bad for "T", please mention it. I'd hate to offend anyone.
And would someone do me the favor of letting me know if it gets to be almost like a bad movie? You know… got the ending figured out five minutes in and it's awful, that kind of thing.
Any thoughts you have the time to and feel like sending my way would be well appreciated. (Besides "go faster". I know, I'm working at a snail's pace here. :)
Thanks so much for reading! It tickles me pink to know that someone is still keeping an eye on my monster baby.
*Edit: There's a disjointed piece of this tale I've had hanging around forever… been itching to connect it. Very close, but not quite there, you know? I wanted to throw out a warning incase I manage to get something out before the morning comes; warning being, I am very, very drunk. 8) If I get a bit out tonight, please pardon me if it ends up a little silly. -4/6/13-