Thanks very much for the feedback, it did help! Keep sending it anywhere you feel necessary. :)
At this moment, I sit staring at my monstrosity where I left it off. I shall try to write tonight. Anyone with half a brain would have given up by now, old as this thing is, but the imaginary people in my head keep on poking at me. They had quite a spirited row yesterday while I was at work, which moved along a bit of this tale... sadly, it's a bit that's well away from the furthest readable point. (Don't you hate it when the imaginary people in your head don't tell a story in order? Cause it's quite irritating.)
Anyhow, thanks for keeping on reading, really! Sorry for the long lack of update. Working on it, promise!