-1Okay. I've decided that I'm going to finish this fic even if I spend the entire year of 2008 doing it. Now my first order of business will be to choose between the two versions of the story that I have, that's where anyone who reads this comes in. Chapter one is the latest version of the story, and chapter two is the original, I'd like anyone who reads them to tell me which they prefer so I can decide what I'm going to finish.
If you think they're both total crap please tell me as well then mention a key example that you think ruins the story so I can not make that mistake again.
Anyway, thanks in advance to anyone who helps me out.