For this story and one of my other ones, I'll be completely re-writing them. I'm very sorry to all of my dedicated readers, I feel absolutely horrible. I'll also be deleting my other two stories for the time being. I found that when I went through both of these stories, that my writing was severely lacking. I won't be deleting them as of yet, and will be posting the new versions separately. I'm hoping to make them better then before, and have faster updates by doing this. I've simply forgotten where I was going with both stories, and so I'd like to start over. Again, I'm very sorry! I'm hoping to have both up either before or after the new year.
Thank you for your patience!