Eh, sorry...not sure if I can keep up with you guys, lol. Not happy with the story--I have no writing skills--so I may delete this.
...Or just "tweak" it. ; Bleh... my apologies... If you want to help me ( as a beta reader, editor, etc.), feel free to tell me so. Hell, I'll even accept personal flames or opinions. Send an e-mail. Make sure you put, "FF Aid" in subject box else I'll delete the message.
Other than that, thanks for putting up for me (if you guys still care, harhar). Cheers.