I Wanna Have Voldemorts Baby!

I got a beta reader (my older sister)! So hopefully my writing has improved now! Thanks for the constructive critisism for my other story (read it, its good anyway...)!

Chapter One: Its not easy.

Ginny Weasly was talking to her brother Ron. "Ronnie I broke up with my boyfriend" "Why?" he asked astounded. Ginny shrugged "I think I love someone else now..." "Harry?" "Eeerrrm not really no. Quiet the opposite i'm afraid"
Ron looked nonplused. "Come on, tell me, who is it then?"
"Well remember my first year at Hogwart?" "Yeeeaaaah" Ron managed slowly, an idea dawning to him. "Well I never really got over my first love so..."
"You wanna say your in love with YOU-KNOW-WHO?"

Harry woke up with a start. Hedwig was knocking on his Durley-room window (it was the holidays). "Coming babe" he murmured half asleep and picked up a piece of parchment. It read:

Hi Harry! Hope youre well and everything, bla bla. Something terrible has happened. Ginny just confessed to me that shes in love with – you never guess it – You-know-who!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.! The exclamation marks were necassary, I feel like !.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. Have sore hand now.
Anyway. What do you say? Your friend, Ron.

"What? Shes completely bonkers! She cant be serious!" Harry said aloud.

But apperently she was. Next week, when Harry and Hermione joined the Order at the burrow she started telling people off who were talking bad about "Tommy" as she kept calling the Dark Lord. "He isn't like that at all!" she kept yelling. "I know him better, I conversed with him for month! He told me he cared for me! He wasnt going to hurt me at all!" People kept shaking their heads at her behaviour. "He killed my parents, Ginny" Harry cried one evening when he just had had enough. "Please stop pining for him already. HE WANTS ME DEAD!"
But Ginny was determined, like people who are hopelessly in love tend to be: she couldnt see the flaws, only the tender voice, solemn looks and loving words Tom Riddle had shown her.

The next day, Ginny was missing. She didnt return the day after that, and people were beginning to get afraid. "She hasnt gone for HIM, or what do you reckon?" Ron said shakily.

But she had. At the very moment she was looking for Voldemort in Little Haggleton, his birthplace. As she approached the Riddle Mansion, she heard voices talking.
"My Death Eaters, you've come to my bidding. I called you and there you are, planning Harry Potters death. Avary, what have you got?" "Well... I cant tell you right now cause there is a girl standing outside LISTENING TO EVERY WORD WE SAY" "A spy? Fetch her!" "yes my lord"
Ginny was dragged in. She didnt resist anyway, she had heard the voice of her loved one! "Who are you?" Voldemort demanded to know. "Dont you know me?" Ginny said. She was wearing a tight pink dress with frills at the plunging neckline. The skirt was very short and showed off her tanned freckled legs. She had enhanced her boobs to get bigger and her golden-red hair shimmered down to her waist. She was not the child she used to be when Tom played with her through the diary. "Ginny?" he said "The girl my diary-self used some years ago? My deatheaters have told me all about it. What do you want?"

"I love you," Ginny said simply.

Cliffhanger! Please tell me what you think!