Hello all! This is my very first fiction so be kind but please please review! I hope you guys like it! All comments really needed!

Chapter 1

Will's Apartment (7:00am)

Will sits at table while eating a doughnut and drinking coffee. Grace walks in hair sticking in every direction and rubs her eyes. She grabs coffee pot only to discover nothings in it. Grabs the empty doughnut box and groans. Will turns around;

W: WHOA! Good lord Grace. Didn't I tell you not to come out of your room before nine? Have respect for the neighbours! Chuckles as Grace glares at him

G: Hahaha but you know. At least I have my doughnut and coffee to comfort me!

W: What do you mean? There's none left. That queer gopher some poor soul name jack devoured the last of them.

G: Well I have my ways! She leans forward and snatches the doughnut out from under Wills open mouth and then grabs his coffee and runs for her room

W: HEY! Grace come on! That's my breakfast! OOOOhhhh. This sucks!

Jack runs in to the apartment in a panic, shrieks and flops dramatically onto the couch.

W: Umm Jack? Silence. Will walks cautiously over to the couch. He reaches down to tap Jack on the shoulder when Jack jumps up. Will screams and jumps back

J: Don't try to console me Will. The one love of my life is gone. How will I live! Dramatically flops down again covering his face

W: Aww… what happened? Did Brittany Spears file another restraining order?

J: Glares at Will NO! And it's not a restraining order for HER. She's just trying to help her CUTE body guard play hard to get! Anyways… It's Karen! Stan…well...he's…BANKRUPT! At the word, Jack breaks into tears Oh Will! What am I…I mean what will Karen…Oh heck what will I do!

W: puzzled Stan? He's bankrupt! What do you mean?

Just then Karen walks into the room with her makeup running down her face

Sorry it's a little rough around the edges but I hope it will be better. Please review!

JustJena